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Postby Coccoa » Oct 3rd, '05, 22:29

1, 2, 1, 2, 3, let's go...

Back on the track, mobbing me and my gang
Ready to kick some ass and split some lungs
I rhyme too fast, sometimes damn too slow
So when i say lay low you better law low
Cuz i finna kill 4 punks in tha row
I just got them marked, here's the first to go
When the virtual dogs bark through the net-hood
First they steal their rhymes then they get food
And have love for game even tho game means treason
And they get cocky and diss ni**az for no real reason
And it's like i aint got already enough in my mind
Kids tryina front through Shady.com like they still on the grind
The worst person in this place you can see him in the DL section
You can see him post G-Unit mixtapes, but he has a Game obsession
Tryin' to diss cuz i am red and not black like him
Then listen to his shit, i read it again and i am like "Damn..
..what the hell, this guy is an internet gangsta"
The biggest wanksta, a big ass sucka
A cali loving, crazy ass motherfucka
Mods are acting like jakes here, dissing me and stuff
Man quit doing that shit, can't you see you aint a rough?
And damn sho you aint a rider, you're loc and you aint a spider
Keep dissing for yourself, i dont see no gats
Matter of fact, i only see two rats
The first one bitches but he never dares
The other one is hailing from the land of the bears
G hata he is and imma kill him like Finca
You dont know about rap, your country made Kalinka
Now wait, slow down, go back to the top, read it again
I did out of no purpose, dont get me wrong man
Never call this a diss, i dont any people get's pissed
I just had to do this thang, cuz ni**a i am runnin'
I aint gunnin' i just check people when the stunt about the people they bannin'
1 last bar homie, if this's a race then i'll chase my medal
This aint hood homie, my rhymes are mental

....18 bars homies.
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Postby HAYZI » Oct 3rd, '05, 22:34

you kno a track should have 8, 16 or 32 bars, or sumtimes 24
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Postby eminemcaparica » Oct 3rd, '05, 22:48

it's great man, propz...
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 3rd, '05, 23:57

ok umm.. who was that dissing? you didnt give names and you should have.
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Postby Sunni » Oct 4th, '05, 01:23

I think he wants us to guess.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 4th, '05, 03:54

ok i reread this and i think i found out who he's dissing

Em_Young wrote:1, 2, 1, 2, 3, let's go...


1. When the virtual dogs bark through the net-hood
First they steal their rhymes then they get food
2. And they get cocky and diss ni**az for no real reason
3. You can see him post G-Unit mixtapes, but he has a Game obsession
4. Mods are acting like jakes here, dissing me and stuff
5. G hata he is and imma kill him like Finca



1. V-Dog
2. Either me or V-Dog(in thismeanswar beef)
3.kaoss80506
4. Hayzi
5. G-Killa
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I still rap better than you.

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Postby j_shady » Oct 4th, '05, 05:25

whooo subliminal shots..good shit good shit
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"I never bow down, and never say doubt/To whom it may concern and whom so ever may try/i'm forever westside and the feather-weight dies/Tell em take ya best shot gon get yourself hot/cus I yelled Bankhead and you felt left out
I ain't mention yo name thats what all this bout"
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Postby HAYZI » Oct 4th, '05, 09:54

haha he dissed me i didnt read past the first 3 lines

dont be dissin me em young we both kno your not on my level you didnt get past round 1 and im in the final and you just make a fool of yourself everytime you write in punchline cypher :lol:
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Postby j_shady » Oct 4th, '05, 15:20

HAYZI wrote:haha he dissed me i didnt read past the first 3 lines

dont be dissin me em young we both kno your not on my level you didnt get past round 1 and im in the final and you just make a fool of yourself everytime you write in punchline cypher :lol:


whoooooo :lol: if this happens, lets keep it friendly people
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I ain't mention yo name thats what all this bout"
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 4th, '05, 19:14

I am not into punchlines u know. It's damn obvious i need more than 2 lines to express sumthin. In any case, its 4 people i am dissing not 5. :P I think i mentioned that, didnt i?

V-Dog, Hayzi, kaoss and Aspirine :P

It wasnt copy paste tho, i wrote it down almost immediately. Like a keyboard freestyle.

Btw mr Hayzi, you should know that things like "i didnt read past the first 3 lines" only proove the fact that u r prolly a white highschool smartass. Yeah u know what, the next time i ll do it like Jayceon. "This aint no subliminal Haizy". :twisted:
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Postby HAYZI » Oct 4th, '05, 20:17

no i wasnt a smart ass in school and im not in high school no more didnt the gulf between our intellect prove that

all the crap you come out with just proves your a high school dumb-ass

and feel free to diss me id be happy to reply everyone here knows you wouldnt stand a chance up against me, i thought even you would realise that!
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Oct 4th, '05, 21:10

lol fuckin bitch, hop off my dick

yo, I *SMOTHER-N-CLIP-HIS-FACE-IN* It's EASY-RIGHT?/ How the fuck IS-HE-TIGHT when his *50'S-HIS-INSPIRATION*?//~
I'm *SMASHIN-VETS* Real Spitta Wit *DRAGON-BREATH*/ This *FAGGOT'S-DEAD* Only Time You Come First Than Me Is In The *ALPHABET*(Think About It)//
I'm The *MASTER-IN-THIS-SECTION* I *CAPTURE-N-SPIT-VENOM*/ I'll Have You Runnin For Days, Like 'Forest Gump' Did *AFTER-HIS-CHECK-LEFT-HIM*//
Returned N *BREAKIN-FACES* Why You Tryin To *FACE-THE-GREATEST*/ Now You Fucked, And It's All Cause You *SAVED-THE-CHANGES*!//
Damn! I'm *FACE-HITTING-GAYS* *STRAIGHT-SIPPIN-'DREA'*/ And Battle Me You'll See More Beef...Than You Do On *THANKSGIVING-DAY!*//
*RAP-THUG-N-GREAT-G* *SLAP-SLUGS-WIT-RABIES*// You Though I'd Get Shreddid, But *BAD-LUCK-I-AIN'T-CHEESE!*//
See It's *TIME-FOR-ARTILLERYS* The *KNIVES-WILL-SCAR-RIGIDLY*/ Em_Young Can Stop Typin his Verse So *I-CAN-START-KILLING-THEE*//
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Postby HAYZI » Oct 4th, '05, 21:19

haha even vdog would slew your ass
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 4th, '05, 21:23

HAYZI wrote:haha even vdog would slew your ass


v-dog would slay most
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Oct 4th, '05, 21:26

HAYZI wrote:haha even vdog would slew your ass



what do you mean by that?
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