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Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 7th, '08, 06:37

If u don't like tha way I write... write something better... bitch's :n:
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Re: Quicky Text

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 7th, '08, 13:12

you got to change your style, you been writing liek this for ages, with no progression and no flow. take the hint that you got to sort your style out.
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Re: Quicky Text

Postby o0_mcbryde_0o » Jul 7th, '08, 13:36

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:you got to change your style, you been writing liek this for ages, with no progression and no flow. take the hint that you got to sort your style out.
bar at wis a little harsh
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Re: Quicky Text

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 7th, '08, 13:39

o0_mcbryde_0o wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:you got to change your style, you been writing liek this for ages, with no progression and no flow. take the hint that you got to sort your style out.
bar at wis a little harsh




everyone has been telling him tae dae it for aboot a yeer, its time for harshness to prevail :smoking:
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Postby o0_mcbryde_0o » Jul 7th, '08, 13:42

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:
o0_mcbryde_0o wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:you got to change your style, you been writing liek this for ages, with no progression and no flow. take the hint that you got to sort your style out.
bar at wis a little harsh




everyone has been telling him tae dae it for aboot a yeer, its time for harshness to prevail :smoking:
mibby he dusny know how tae get better
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Re: Quicky Text

Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 7th, '08, 13:46

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:
o0_mcbryde_0o wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:you got to change your style, you been writing liek this for ages, with no progression and no flow. take the hint that you got to sort your style out.
bar at wis a little harsh




everyone has been telling him tae dae it for aboot a yeer, its time for harshness to prevail :smoking:


does anyone beat me in text battles... NO!
do I care that u don't like my style of writing... NO!
do u motherfuckers ever have anything positive to say... NO!

so word to tha wise next time u see a Rain Matrix post and decide u wanna hate
do us all a favor and keep it to yurself... u guys have been telling me to switch it up for about a year
telling me my style is played out but never actually giving me help...

u just wait to I get pissed and tell me I have a poor attitude... wonder why... FUCK OFF HATERS!
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Re: Quicky Text

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 7th, '08, 13:48

does anyone beat me in text battles... NO!


yes me, numerous times, like when you challenged me and got banned for a week coz of the stipulation of the battle.

do I care that u don't like my style of writing... NO!


then why do you post ?

do u motherfuckers ever have anything positive to say... NO!


yes, you got praised your lyrics and text skills lots of time

so word to tha wise next time u see a Rain Matrix post and decide u wanna hate
do us all a favor and keep it to yurself... u guys have been telling me to switch it up for about a year
telling me my style is played out but never actually giving me help...

u just wait to I get pissed and tell me I have a poor attitude... wonder why... FUCK OFF HATERS!



it iant hating, we are tyring to help you.
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Re: Quicky Text

Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 7th, '08, 13:52

telling me to switch my style isn't helping... cuz that's all u fucking say
I can't flow I don't convey emotion... I don't care... :o
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Re: Quicky Text

Postby Greeeeeeg69 » Jul 7th, '08, 13:57

chill bro
maybe you should change bar gotta know what he talkin bout
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Re: Quicky Text

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 7th, '08, 13:57

Rain Matrix wrote:telling me to switch my style isn't helping... cuz that's all u fucking say
I can't flow I don't convey emotion... I don't care... :o



well i cant exactly say change your style and then give you a style you have to find that for yourself, and the reason you cant flow if your structure of rhyming, listen to artist and were they rhyme on the beat and how they flow to it, it aint easy but if you wanne do it you got to put in the work. writing the lyrics is the easy part for you, so you dont need to practice it anymore you got it down, you got to put as much effort into your rapping as you do to your writing.
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Re: Quicky Text

Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 7th, '08, 14:06

thanks
honestly haters are gonna hate and balla's are gonna ball

I don't know what to do now... if I can't be a rapper then fuck being alive
eminem is tha only white rapper alive that's right now I remember

time to go get high...
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Re: Quicky Text

Postby Greeeeeeg69 » Jul 7th, '08, 15:02

ata boy
smoke till you pass out or your a pussy.
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Re: Quicky Text

Postby Greeeeeeg69 » Jul 7th, '08, 15:14

haha being high is almost as great as sex. not better tho
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Re: Quicky Text

Postby Kosovic » Jul 7th, '08, 16:17

Retardation levels increase day by day here.

@Rain Matrix
Find a better hobby.

@Greg69
Nnnnnnooooooothing, i refrain from commenting on you....... :unsure: .........wait.......
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Postby Greeeeeeg69 » Jul 7th, '08, 17:24

haha yours are off da charts homo
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