ThomasAguanis vs. DragonzEdge

[ThomasAguanis]

you may be iron clad but i'll harm you anyway.
i'm like pure acid i'll burn through you anyday.
and try to turn me upside down. you'll just repeat whatever i say.
come up with your own rhymes. Don't be gay.
and i'm not saying you stole my shit
i'm just trying to prove i can spit.
so comeback with some better rhymes
because i wanna do the same so we'll both shine.
and i mean we should give all we can.
so in the end we both come out better men.

i thought i was signed in.
my bad
this was mine.

[4D]

I actually been rapping for like 2 years and I am a girl but people say I can beat alot of boys out there in the rap game..so ima try and spit here online for you's

Lyrically bound with a gun in one hand I pound
Any one who starts shit will get knocked the fuck to the ground
I know how to get down, they call me Vodatious they call you Charlie brown
I grew up with thugs and pimps trying to get threw life with people acting like they was the shit
Being with the guy of my dreams turned out to be a night mare he always cheated on me
Like we was in a movie scene ,he always put on that theme
He acted so shady he was always so lazy, he would say he loved me then he would beat me like crazy
scary ass times fits into my bad ass rhymes
I am just about ready to end this life go up to god and my grandma and make everything right
But before I go:
I am sorry too everyone whome I let down,Sorry to my family who I didn't make proud
And I am sorry to my friends for not being true most of all I am sorry to my love for not being his best boo
{Gun Shots}


Thats from one of my songs with my friends..tell me what you think..

It`s actually pretty good, but you steppin in to a battle zone. Post your own topic in the "Creative writing" thread. Keep it up, your not bad, better than your rhyme in Darjans page, hee hee!

[Guest]

you may try to hurt me but it hurts so good
i'll chew you faster than fat kid eats food
i aint a parrot so i aint gon repeat your words
i already make my own rhymes, yours are turds
i know im good so i aint even gonna trip
my words make more sense than geometry to crips
imma keep fightin cuz im gon be the one to shine
i hold the fort down til victory is mine
im givin it my all cuz imma be the one
ill keep rhymin till the last record is spun

[DragonzEdge]

god dammit, i thought i clicked the log me in everytime thing...it dont work!!
that was mine btw

[ThomasAguanis]

Lyrikal Assassin you shouldn't be rappin
your rhymes are like eminem retiring-not happening
i'm now here to slay the dragon with the edge of my sword
when you see me comming you'll pray to the lord
"Oh please God save me from Thomas"
and god replys "it's your fault for fucking with Aguanis"
"I'm not saving you from him. you shouldn't have responded."
"you should have stayed home and jerked off to that porn about bondage."
by this time i'm right in front of you ready to attack
i swing my sword and your eyes roll back.
your now cut in 2 at the waist in a pool of blood.
then God makes it rain and you turn to mud.

[Guest]

when does the battle end anyways?

well heres mine

Dont be mad cuz i rhyme better than you
you just pissed cuz every syllable was true
I ain't afraid of you so i dont need to pray
you better bite My tongue cuz i aint watchin what i say
I aint need savin i got my own back
you should stop rhymin cuz yo shit is wack
I aint jackin cuz i aint want my wrist hurt
but for a redneck like you?"who needs porn when you have your sister!"
you usin a sword for your plan of attack?
man fuck that shit, imma use a gat
you gon bow down to me and yo ass gon cry
unfortunately for you, the bullets gon fly

[DragonzEdge]

god dammit!!

[4D]

Lyrikal Assassin you shouldn't be rappin
your rhymes are like eminem retiring-not happening
i'm now here to slay the dragon with the edge of my sword
when you see me comming you'll pray to the lord
"Oh please God save me from Thomas"
and god replys "it's your fault for fucking with Aguanis"
"I'm not saving you from him. you shouldn't have responded."
"you should have stayed home and jerked off to that porn about bondage."
by this time i'm right in front of you ready to attack
i swing my sword and your eyes roll back.
your now cut in 2 at the waist in a pool of blood.
then God makes it rain and you turn to mud.

Thomas that`s your best rhyme yet, your murdering these guys.
Love the line "Lyrikal Assassin you shouldn't be rappin
your rhymes are like eminem retiring-not happening", that`s great. You don`t need to even respond to dragonz edge, he`s just makin an idiot of himself by not loggin every time, lol. That`s some funny shit, ha ha ha.

[ThomasAguanis]

how about they were the last verses?
i could try and put a poll in the topic so people vote for who they want to win and we both vote for ourselves so everytime we look we see who's winning. then at the end of the week or whenever the voting stops and a winner is selected.

[4D]

Sounds a good way to do it. You got my vote, just thought you beat Dragonzedge with that last verse!

[DragonzEdge]

i don't care if i win or lose, I'm just trynna get better. shut up Fordie, I am used to logging in after i click the "log in automatically box" and not be logged out afterwards, like in other forums.

[4D]

i don't care if i win or lose, I'm just trynna get better. shut up Fordie, I am used to logging in after i click the "log in automatically box" and not be logged out afterwards, like in other forums.

Just takin da piss dawg, i`ve done it a few times myself

[eminemcaparica]

50/50

[DragonzEdge]

i guess i lose
congrats

[ThomasAguanis]

thanks man. great battle. it made me better.i thought the poll would go on longer but you said it was done.

if you want you could always start a new topic. maybe ThomasAguanis vs.DragonzEdge Round 2. just start it off and i'll respond since i started it this time. you don't have to even start it but if you want to i think it'd be fun.