Ego - Slept On

[SG.]

Dope dope dope. Awesome flow here from both of you. I also really love that hook. To be honest, there's nothing to criticise here because I can't find anything bad about it.

Keep writing shit, guys! You're great inspiration.

[Man1x]

Good shit guys as always, the flow was on key and rhymes were top notch. I love the topic too. The hook was amazing as well. Not much to criticize and I still stand by the statement that you both need to record these soon. Favorite Geno lines:

"I'll spit it with a severed flow, my Ego man I let it go,
The beat expands and then explodes, covers me from head to toe"

Eighty days straight in a cage and it's a shame to stay that way,
Maybe we'll parade today, elated as your brain decays"

These felt good to me.

Favorite Menzo lines:

"Our heart’s beat for greatness, a quest in which we aim to grasp
Others leach and claim friends, but pretend we’ve never rapped
So underneath our tamed grins, we are pissed so step it back
Don’t wonder if we playin’ or raise a question when we ask"

[ChristinaE12]

I really wish I could feed this. But I really can't cause I'd be pretty much repeating what I've said the last couple times I've fed your pieces.

One thing is though you guys still seem to be getting better, all around. Even if it's just minor things here and there.

Also maybe just come up with crazy concepts, something different..I know, between the two of you, could probably come up with something.

Basically, great rhyming again. Flow/Structure appears to be on point. etc...

[Sam.]

I really wish I could feed this. But I really can't cause I'd be pretty much repeating what I've said the last couple times I've fed your pieces.

One thing is though you guys still seem to be getting better, all around. Even if it's just minor things here and there.

Also maybe just come up with crazy concepts, something different..I know, between the two of you, could probably come up with something.

Basically, great rhyming again. Flow/Structure appears to be on point. etc...

You never feed me ,why the hate ?

[Sam.]

Rofl.

Don't you be laughing on me Mister.

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Gennete.

I must say that multis are not your strength at all they come naturally from you ,what your stregth is that you place your thoughts in those Rhymes so flawlessly.Even though I like this type of Rhyme placement but it's getting too played out now so try a new one new style next time brah !.The verse was dope and filled with clever lines...wow !.I always feel amazed at your vocab breh but that caused harm to the flow at places this time.Keep at it doe.


Menzo


OMFG ! The way this shit flowed at the start was like Butter on a hot Pan.The flow was all good till the 8th Bars where it just went off that is it changed ,that's what you did wrong.I mean the way you managed the Rhymes in the 1st half didn't reflect in the 2nd half so I was a bit dissapointed tbh.Same compliment that I gave to Geno also applies to you ,great fucking vocab but that didn't hamper your flow in any way.I see you worked on the structure because that came out dope.Good improvement man ,keep at it.


Overall liked the things that both of you said in your verses ,so I didn't point out any particular line that i liked.

Keep at it bronies.

Feed this.

[Sam.]

Thanks for the feed my man! I appreciate it. Interesting comment on the flow, but once you catch it (after the 8th line), it should be on lock down.

Regardless, thanks for peeping homie! I'll check your shit when I get home from school

I always believed in consistent Flow & Rhyming tbh even when you use different sounding words.