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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby Spyder » Nov 23rd, '11, 01:04

Sam :wub:

hell yeah son i loved your verse
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby Sam. » Nov 23rd, '11, 01:14

Thanks a ton man, I wrote this piece in like 2 hours in 2 days, pretty quick in my eyes. It started as some thing else and ended up like this :shifty: .Me and Spyder never thought that this would come to this. I had another verse planned for this again 34 Bars but some how settled for this. And yes I do have an accent, but I'm using the UK accent for this and I can do that.
Spyder wrote:Sam :wub:

hell yeah son i loved your verse

Did it live up to your expectations in comparison to your verse? :wub:
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby Spyder » Nov 23rd, '11, 01:39

:laughing:

ya this isnt the original 3MTD, thats an awkward story

but i didnt know you had another 34 :confusion:
that means we can do as planned :shifty:

and totally, you had some bars before i started, so i had to match you :y:
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby Mr.DGAF » Nov 23rd, '11, 15:48

Updated my post with feed for Spyder. :whistle:
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How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby Sam. » Nov 23rd, '11, 18:58

Spyder wrote::laughing:

ya this isnt the original 3MTD, thats an awkward story

but i didnt know you had another 34 :confusion:
that means we can do as planned :shifty:

and totally, you had some bars before i started, so i had to match you :y:

That 34 is the one I sent you 1st, remember the story... :shifty:
& about that :shifty: Time is essence, nahimean? :b:
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby Spyder » Nov 23rd, '11, 23:29

so those who said they feed today havent :coffee:
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby Sam. » Nov 23rd, '11, 23:33

Spyder wrote:so those who said they feed today havent :coffee:

Yeah lol, this has me pissed, people have time to feed some new piece and look up to feed old one's, but not this.This is what I get for feeding everyone. :n:
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby Spyder » Nov 23rd, '11, 23:41

i know game will i aint even sweatin on him.

lets see nutz zabe man1x all promised feed.

we should see words and Geno sense u feed them, and i have as of late.

sad :shakehead:
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby WakeUpShow » Nov 23rd, '11, 23:46

I'll be hittin' this up when I get enough time :y:
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby Sam. » Nov 23rd, '11, 23:47

Cosh wrote:I'll be hittin' this up when I get enough time :y:

Please do. :worship:
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby Spyder » Nov 23rd, '11, 23:48

cosh keep his word... nawwwww
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby SG. » Nov 23rd, '11, 23:53

Edited my earlier post with feed.

I keep my word, don't worry about that. :flower:
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby Spyder » Nov 24th, '11, 02:30

@Zabe

thanks bro :worship:

i have a mic, Solace taught me how to mix pro, helped my delivery sound better.
im starting with pre-made hooks so im not worrying bout overlays quite yet.

but audio track soonish :y:
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby autotooner » Nov 24th, '11, 19:47

I think you both killed it. :y:

Sam: Very good work, I really like the subject matter. It was kinda scary, as I was reading it, it was like I was reading it with Immortal Techniques voice.

Spyder: The content in your's is crazy, I had to read it twice to make sure I caught everything. As stated before your punchlines are awesome. :y:

Sorry I cannot give much criticism on this, maybe me being new to this make flaws harder to spot by me, either way... Great work to both of you. :8)
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Re: Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

Postby Sam. » Nov 24th, '11, 19:59

:o MG.

Thanks for the feed, *name*. :b: This is what I wanted.

I knew about the Rhyming words that I used and I also knew that it would cause people feeding this a problem.I wrote this completely to a beat(Rhyme Asylum - Ground Zero), and applied styles of their 2nd Album to this(In terms of the structure).

The last time I tried their style(Bars Of Assault), I suppose I didn't catch it to the extent. Venom's feed and things that he said to me made me study their style, so I did. This is my 1st attempt at deeper punchlines and I think I'm proud of it, usually I don't get that feel.

About the Accent, I can do the UK accent very well and the normal one that I've, so the flow is not a issue for me, I've it nailed.

Hey! Did you get my punchlines? :)
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