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Ego - The Roast (TR Shady Tape #2)

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Postby Wreck » Aug 14th, '12, 09:29

This was nice. Reminded me of an Ego rendition of Em's Same Song & Dance, but with a little humor & depth added here. I liked it, not the color scheme though, but that doesn't matter. Nice work guys.
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Re: Ego - The Roast (TR Shady Tape #2)

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 16th, '13, 00:20

This is a super late post on this, but since you linked it to me I don't give a fuck, faggots. I really liked this, the story telling was great. Only thing I'd say as that the hook is corny as fuck, but I also think that's a good thing because the contrast with the subject matter is great.
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Re: Ego - The Roast (TR Shady Tape #2)

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 16th, '13, 00:23

Geno wrote:
CanadaPure wrote:This is a super late post on this, but since you linked it to me I don't give a fuck, faggots. I really liked this, the story telling was great. Only thing I'd say as that the hook is corny as fuck, but I also think that's a good thing because the contrast with the subject matter is great.

Well you can blame the producer for making a wack ass hook on a dope ass beat lol.

Glad you liked it. :y:


Nah it worked, kind of played out in a funny way like what Em tried to do on Syllables, but it worked better with this track imo.
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Re: Ego - The Roast (TR Shady Tape #2)

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 16th, '13, 00:27

Geno wrote:Of course it did. We're dope as hell son! Haha. But for real, Menzo's rhymes on this track are incredibly overlooked. They're VERY intricate.

Has the "with a buzz / skipped the rush" rhyme scheme for the first few lines and then goes Eminem on us with a bunch of other intertwining schemes and comes back to the original later on with "this chick's rug".

It blows my mind how it all still makes perfect coherent sense.


Yeah the whole thing was really well executed. You kept the story working while having some sick rhymes in there to match. Very good performances from both of you.
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Re: Ego - The Roast (TR Shady Tape #2)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 16th, '13, 00:28

CanadaPure wrote:This is a super late post on this, but since you linked it to me I don't give a fuck, faggots. I really liked this, the story telling was great. Only thing I'd say as that the hook is corny as fuck, but I also think that's a good thing because the contrast with the subject matter is great.

This.
...Menzo went in on this tbh.
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Re: Ego - The Roast (TR Shady Tape #2)

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 16th, '13, 00:31

Geno wrote:Yeah man.

I was like "how am I even gonna come after that?"

And then I busted.


...a nut :shifty:
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