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Re: Painkiller & CanadaPure - When Push Comes To Shove

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 13th, '13, 20:53

Thanks guys! I'm glad that we could put to something a little bit better and more serious than the last one, I'm sure I can speak for Painkiller too when I say that we appreciate the feedback!
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Re: Painkiller & CanadaPure - When Push Comes To Shove

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 13th, '13, 21:42

Yes, thanks for the feed you guys. It's very much appreciated.
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Re: Painkiller & CanadaPure - When Push Comes To Shove

Postby Trimss » Jan 14th, '13, 20:04

Yeah this was shit, not worth feeding it fagg.

Nah on the real.. I liked the content and the beat. That's a pretty dark and fucked up topic, it was executed nicely and the rhyming wasn't bad at all.

I don't think the beat should've been darker, it's kinda dark enough, what would make it darker is the way it's delivered vocally. But I thought it was cool. I like it better than the goofy one.
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Re: Painkiller & CanadaPure - When Push Comes To Shove

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 14th, '13, 20:08

Thanks bru, Image
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Re: Painkiller & CanadaPure - When Push Comes To Shove

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 15th, '13, 01:09

Geno wrote:Odd beat choice for those topics. I mean.. it works, but it could've been better.

That aside though, dope verses. Keep at it, and continue dropping more. :y:

Thanks Geno means a lot. Glad you enjoyed it. :happy:
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Re: Painkiller & CanadaPure - When Push Comes To Shove

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 15th, '13, 01:11

Geno wrote:Odd beat choice for those topics. I mean.. it works, but it could've been better.
That aside though, dope verses. Keep at it, and continue dropping more. :y:


I honestly see where you're coming from one it, but I think it might be one of those situations where the beat works a lot better if there was audio for how the verses would be delivered maybe.

Thanks for the feed, it's encouraging. :y:
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Re: Painkiller & CanadaPure - When Push Comes To Shove

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 15th, '13, 01:16

Geno wrote:Yeah, definitely. Like I said, it works. I know what you were going for when you picked the beat. With the beat being a little lighter, it gave the song a twisted kinda feeling.


So you're not going to put me in the van. :happy: :y:
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Re: Painkiller & CanadaPure - When Push Comes To Shove

Postby ImANoob » Jan 15th, '13, 03:38

oh shit nigga dats good shit
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Re: Painkiller & CanadaPure - When Push Comes To Shove

Postby Eminemeatinm&m » Jan 17th, '13, 02:48

Homie me be stuntin and sayin dat song is only good cuz o' my homeboy CP
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