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Re: Bigray feat Silver x Sam X Slim Fiasco

Postby Sam. » Mar 27th, '13, 12:51

Spyder wrote:Word that deff helped with the flow on that, but they were all using a different beat.
That's why the topic and flow didn't fit to the others.
It was a dope verse, just next time I'd recommend staying with the group beat, just to make sure its coherent to everyone

I wrote it to the beat posted by biggie. It flowed well, too. I know it's hard, but.....you're 100% correct at your end. It's all good. I was just inspired by the flow in that verse, and just decided to try it out.

I admit that my verse was serious as fuck. I thought I would wanna stand out, and I did it in a wrong way. I should have asked biggie for the verses given by others just to get a smell of what was cooking. Well, there's always next time.

Cheers Spyder. :y:
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Re: Bigray feat Silver x Sam X Slim Fiasco

Postby Sam. » Mar 27th, '13, 13:10

Whatever you say, biggie! :shifty:

I can understand the flow/rhymes you had, man. I imagined different ways of puttin it and it worked. I thought from your point of view, though. Part of what Spdie said was true, so note it down. Good shit.
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