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Re: Bigray - Warning

Postby Eedee » Apr 4th, '13, 01:21

Wait, so you wrote this about me? I couldn't tell.
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Re: Bigray - Warning

Postby CanadaPure » Apr 4th, '13, 03:37

That Eedee/bigray beefosaurus is sexy.
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Re: Bigray - Warning

Postby Spyder » Apr 4th, '13, 03:38

CanadaPure wrote:That Eedee/bigray beefosaurus is sexy.


can chocolate rain come from vanilla sky :o
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Re: Bigray - Warning

Postby CanadaPure » Apr 4th, '13, 03:40

Spyder wrote:
CanadaPure wrote:That Eedee/bigray beefosaurus is sexy.


can chocolate rain come from vanilla sky :o


http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index ... 815AA3yyNp

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Re: Bigray - Warning

Postby Spyder » Apr 4th, '13, 03:44

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Re: Bigray - Warning

Postby Eedee » Apr 4th, '13, 06:24

CanadaPure wrote:That Eedee/bigray beefosaurus is sexy.


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Re: Bigray - Warning

Postby Just Silver » Apr 6th, '13, 14:13

good improving air def rhymes with prayer i gotta get writing ive been hiatus making beats

a little short but nice
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Re: Bigray - Warning

Postby Just Silver » Apr 6th, '13, 19:39

lol yea im back just makin sure writers block doesnt stick this time
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Re: Bigray - Warning

Postby CanadaPure » Apr 6th, '13, 20:38

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Blu wrote:You've improved your end rhymes, good job. The only lines words that don't rhyme are "prayer" and "air," unless you said "air" as "AY-er." But still, good job.

Wasn't really feeling the beat choice but hey, you're only trying to get better. Good job bro.


Prayer and air rhyme perfectly from where Ray's from, people don't say "prayer" as "pray-er" that much, it's more like "prair".

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Just saw others said the same thing.


I also say prair. So it works for me.
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Re: Bigray - Warning

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Apr 6th, '13, 20:40

I say Prair, but in my head I go Pray-er, so it really depends on what you're aiming for. But Prayer works.
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Re: Bigray - Warning

Postby Francesco » Apr 11th, '13, 13:43

Great drop Ray... :worship: Keep it up little homie!
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Re: Bigray - Warning

Postby Francesco » Apr 11th, '13, 15:05

bigray wrote:Thanks man!


It's all good... don't mention it. I meant what I said about it too! :y:
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