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Geno & CP - Knowing You

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Re: Geno & CP - Knowing You

Postby Sam. » May 31st, '13, 23:03

Your content was good. It was about a situation that I can imagine and write myself. I'm not taking credit from you with that comment about it being not that impressive. You can say it wasn't new to me as a reader. Seeing the relation of the verse to your life makes me wanna rate it near Geno's verse.
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Re: Geno & CP - Knowing You

Postby CanadaPure » Jun 2nd, '13, 00:48

Hesky wrote:
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I just didn't get how the flow worked at all, I picked it up on Geno's verse and started again. This was really well woven, both of you kept me interested in a theme I don't really care much for. I think your lyrics, and the way they're designed to flow really brought out the best in the beat. I think anything at a slower pace wouldn't have had that same effect :y:

Well done, guys!


I know, that's the one thing I really dislike about doing some text only stuff. If you flow is weird or whatever on a particular section or piece, it doesn't translate well into text at all.

Thanks Hesky!
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Re: Geno & CP - Knowing You

Postby Snakebeast » Jun 2nd, '13, 03:41

TBH I read Geno's stuff in a Yelawolf-esque flow and it worked pretty fucking awesomely.
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