Hip-Hop (All enemies diss)

[Sam.]

That's just the 1st Verse? Holy fuck, son, that's a lot of work you put there. I'm honoured.

[Francesco]

That's just the 1st Verse? Holy fuck, son, that's a lot of work you put there. I'm honoured.

No problem at all... You said you loved the first verse so I hope that has helped you understand the lines you didn't initially understand.

Second's verse breaking down is coming later on!

[MistaVijilantee]

Either the links not showing up or is there a link to a song or something anyway.
Your rhymes remind me quite a bit of Ghostface Killah's, they require more than one listen - or in this case look - too fully understand them.
I'd be keen to hear an actual track to this tho.

[Francesco]

Either the links not showing up or is there a link to a song or something anyway.
Your rhymes remind me quite a bit of Ghostface Killah's, they require more than one listen - or in this case look - too fully understand them.
I'd be keen to hear an actual track to this tho.

Nah... that's just the link of feed & it is one of Ray's Creative Writing pieces. It's fine actually... just delete your board cookies not to have problems opening some of the topics/links or whatever.

Thanks a lot for the feed homie... I appreciate it! I never realized my rhymes were similar to Ghost's ones in whatever way but he was one of my fave rappers at some point so I guess I might have got influenced by his unique way or whatever.

[Emadyville]

I enjoyed it. the rhymes were pretty intense, some i think i didnt get how youd pronounce them to rhyme but i trust you on that lol.

the flow was cool how it picked up at places, and overall seemed pretty darn good man.

nice drop!

[Francesco]

Thanks a lot Emady & Menzo...
Your feedback means a lot to me 'cuz you two are my all time fave TR members!