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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 18th, '06, 23:03

good haikus

a haiku is writen like this
5 Syllable line
7 Syllable line
5 Syllable line
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 23:04

ThomasAguanis wrote:good haikus

a haiku is writen like this
5 Syllable line
7 Syllable line
5 Syllable line


damn you thomas why'd you give it away? :tounge2: :(
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 23:05

:angry: one last try :angry:


an old pond
the sound of a frog jumping
into water


:smoking: yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah :smoking:


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i get it!!!
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 23:06

Lil' PimP wrote::angry: one last try :angry:


a pond
the sound of a frog jumping
into water


:smoking: yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah :smoking:


thomas gave it away and you STILL can't come up with a haiku :loser:
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 23:07

well it would be good to know what a syllable is :smoking:
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 23:08

the first cold shower
even the monkey seems to want
a little sex from all.


thats it right? :smoking:

:'(
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 23:09

Lil' PimP wrote:well it would be good to know what a syllable is :smoking:


you're kidding me right? :laughing: you learn what a syllable is in the 2nd grade :laughing:
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 23:11

:angry: just tell me if thats a haiku^^ :angry:
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 23:12

no it's not a haiku marker try again :flower:
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 23:18

Darkended dreams
become modern grapes of wrath
reaping a bitter wine.




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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 23:20

wow you suck at poetry marker :laughing:
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 23:21

MuNxMuN wrote:wow you suck at poetry marker :laughing:


i copied that from some site :giggle:
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 23:49

is that one max^


i gots one :smoking:

noone likes banana
dancing alone
in the cold


:'( :smoking:
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 23:50

maybe got it but marker didn't :p
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 23:52

this is all me :smoking:


all alone on he chair

beating away at porn

realizng i have no life


:smoking: that one :'(
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