True love

[stevethetruth]

idk man but thanks for trying to help idk what to do
i guess i'll try to get better even i doubt i will lol
(because i've been writing for like 6 months and i haven't improved an ounce)

But that's because you haven't made 100% effort to improve. I always used to ask Aspirine, G Killa, MC Cubz and Tom on MSN what they thought of my rhymes and what I could do to improve and I still do it now.

Do this lyrical song. Just try it. It doesn't matter if it's shit. But if you keep goin' at, that's what matters.

Take Dope for example. He always got bad feedback, but he didn't let it get to him and he kept going. Now he gets good feedback. And I respect him for that, and so do others on this board.

Trust, another 6 months time and you'll be looking back on your rhymes like wtf. I do it now. And in another 6 months time, I'll do it again lol.

yeah your right i haevn't really tried to improve i guess

i'll try the track
and i hope i'm able to look back and do what you did lol

thanks for the help

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idk man but thanks for trying to help idk what to do
i guess i'll try to get better even i doubt i will lol
(because i've been writing for like 6 months and i haven't improved an ounce)

But that's because you haven't made 100% effort to improve. I always used to ask Aspirine, G Killa, MC Cubz and Tom on MSN what they thought of my rhymes and what I could do to improve and I still do it now.

Do this lyrical song. Just try it. It doesn't matter if it's shit. But if you keep goin' at, that's what matters.

Take Dope for example. He always got bad feedback, but he didn't let it get to him and he kept going. Now he gets good feedback. And I respect him for that, and so do others on this board.

Trust, another 6 months time and you'll be looking back on your rhymes like wtf. I do it now. And in another 6 months time, I'll do it again lol.

i was so bad i had to get asprine to explain flow to me but yeh post your first shit and your last i look back at my first rythm all the time im like fuck thats shits wack

[stevethetruth]

Good luck man I look forward to hearing it.

And I'll try get a few ppl to give feedback that can help, like MC Cubz, he gives good feedback.

thanks man i hope to do good on the track lol

[stevethetruth]

i think it's lovely.


the words really spoke to me.. it's like, as soon as i started to read them, i thought about someone i loved.


nice job.

thanks i'm glad someone liked it lol

[stevethetruth]

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[soperman005]

hey i hella like this one.. i like ur rhymes.. theyre pretty clever

[stevethetruth]

hey i hella like this one.. i like ur rhymes.. theyre pretty clever

cool thanks a lot for the feedback man
glad you like it

[Inches]

Cause without her you

[stevethetruth]

cool
thanks for the feedback man