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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 29th, '06, 01:50

inches2010 wrote:
Bar wrote:
inches2010 wrote:
Bar wrote:
inches2010 wrote:if iwas gonna die tomorrow,
i would work my forearms till they fall off

:shifty:


:laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

i cant bielieve it actually took this many posts till someone answered the question :laughing:



you dont even wanna know the other things id do
:shifty:


your SOOOOOO right please DONT share them :p



ill up pictures
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NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sad music*
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Postby sinemm » Oct 29th, '06, 08:58

lmao yea similar :D :) but urs is cool too..
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 29th, '06, 18:58

bump dat shit :smoking:
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Postby rhiannon » Oct 29th, '06, 23:18

damn i liked that bar...n the last verse kinna built up tension like a good book lmao i was like :shocked: wats gonna happen?lmao...nice work man...n i liked how it wasn all clever rhymes lol idk it had a good effect i think...n i dont understand complicated things lmao...nice work man :flower:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 29th, '06, 23:26

rhiannon wrote:damn i liked that bar...n the last verse kinna built up tension like a good book lmao i was like :shocked: wats gonna happen?lmao...nice work man...n i liked how it wasn all clever rhymes lol idk it had a good effect i think...n i dont understand complicated things lmao...nice work man :flower:


thx :worship:

glad to hear you enjoyed it :D its actually got a real dark story to it lol
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Postby rhiannon » Oct 29th, '06, 23:28

lol..complete it man!
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 29th, '06, 23:29

rhiannon wrote:lol..complete it man!


ill need to wait till i get into that sort of mood again lol :sweating:
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Postby PmT-Faith » Oct 29th, '06, 23:30

Its really good only thing is lol, If you died tommorow theres not much you can do about it, you couldnt write a day before about it cause you wouldnt know, So your basically in a state and position of doing nothing about it, except accepting the fact that it happened and (blank out). there for you are Logically screwed lol. But yea again Nice song lol Pce
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 29th, '06, 23:32

PmT-Faith wrote:Its really good only thing is lol, If you died tommorow theres not much you can do about it, you couldnt write a day before about it cause you wouldnt know, So your basically in a state and position of doing nothing about it, except accepting the fact that it happened and (blank out). there for you are Logically screwed lol. But yea again Nice song lol Pce


:laughing: classic :worship: thx man :D
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Postby 2 DeeP » Oct 29th, '06, 23:35

nice man :smoking:
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Postby C-Game » Oct 31st, '06, 17:48

the title scares me :(
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