New V-Dog Da Menace Shit!!!!!!!!!!!

by **V-DogDaMenace** » Sep 12th, '05, 21:16

HAYZI wrote:i was givin him all kinds of advice i even offered him sum of my fuckin beats then hes fuckin switchin over nutin

what do u meen over nuttin?? u dissed me

by **eminemcaparica** » Sep 12th, '05, 21:17

now that's my boi 8)

by **HAYZI** » Sep 12th, '05, 21:19

it was a fuckin diss game you stupid fuck!
now your all callin me shit makin 2 topics about me since when has a battle on here been serious its meant to be all love but obviously sayin your rhymes are prewritten hits home for you

by **V-DogDaMenace** » Sep 12th, '05, 21:23

HAYZI wrote:it was a fuckin diss game you stupid fuck!
now your all callin me shit makin 2 topics about me since when has a battle on here been serious its meant to be all love but obviously sayin your rhymes are prewritten hits home for you

lol, nigga i told u not do diss me at all u dumb fuck, and i only made 1 topic of u nigga, dont feel 2 special

by **HAYZI** » Sep 12th, '05, 21:25

da fuck you talkin about you didnt tell me shit bout dissin you
and so this topic aint dissin me no? so i dont see my name in your rhyme no?

by **V-DogDaMenace** » Sep 12th, '05, 21:30

HAYZI wrote:and so this topic aint dissin me no? so i dont see my name in your rhyme no?

what, nigga? oh and dis topic aint dissin u, cuz dis topic is called 'New V-Dog Da Menace Shit!!!!' ur name aint on it

and yes ur rhyme is in the rap, who da fuck said it wasnt?

by **HAYZI** » Sep 12th, '05, 21:32

so its a battle rap....about me...... but this topic aint about me.........ok gotcha :roll:

and im finished wiv you im sick of all this childish shit im outta dis

by **V-DogDaMenace** » Sep 12th, '05, 21:35

HAYZI wrote:so its a battle rap....about me...... but this topic aint about me.........ok gotcha
and im finished wiv you im sick of all this childish shit im outta dis

ight lataz, be on da look out for my new rhymes :wink:

by **ThomasAguanis** » Sep 12th, '05, 21:40

ASPIRINE wrote:i gave u an 8

ORIGINALITY

Im feeling ur lines and ur words punch and all that but man cmon u gotta try sumtin but battle rhymes
coz ill shit talk is eazy not that im saying this one isnt good

but maybe next time ull make up a story of some kind, put some deeper thoughts in the rhyme

and man.. NICE WORDPLAY

Peace!

i gave you a 10 but i agree with aspirine maybe next time you could do a story type song.

by **V-DogDaMenace** » Sep 13th, '05, 03:38

HAYZI wrote:i even fuckin said if i make it id take da fool wit me but he can fuck off hes on his own now

lol

by **eminemcaparica** » Sep 13th, '05, 13:59

now that it's over, y'all still on that thing about T12?

New V-Dog Da Menace Shit!!!!!!!!!!!

What Do You Rate My Rap?

Who is online