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Postby eminemcaparica » Sep 14th, '05, 13:27

damn, you are a ryme machine or something?
very good bro. :wink:
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Postby Sunni » Sep 14th, '05, 22:16

He is very good.
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 15th, '05, 20:23

you better CHECK WHO YOUR TALKING TO, yer cliques straight "pussy with beef" like LESBIAN BARBEQUES!/
yer RECORD IS GARBAGE DUDE, exchanging THREATS IS IMPROPABLE i'll go to halloween DRESSED IN YOUR CARCUSS OOPS!/
Im an EXORCIST SPARKING FEUDS my EFFORTLESS THOUGHTS AND SPEWS, are ridiculously greulsome, hoped you skipped BREAKFAST AND BROUGHT A FEW extra INTESTINES IT'S AWFULLY
CRUDE even the DEVIL WOULD COUGH AND PUKE!/
REPPING REMARKABLE, my EXCELLENT ARSENAL will you have your body LEFT IN A DARKENED TOMB, and i never "gave a fuck" my squads not SUCCESSFUL AS 'PROSTITUTES'!/

plain and simply nigga V-DOGS THE ANSWER, started out STARVING FOR CHANCES but im "here(hair) now" SOLVING THE CANCER/
My verse is the SPARK OF DISASTER, wanna get some "shit off your chest?" koo, stuff your HEART IN A PAMPER!/
My shells, are HOLLOW AND LEAD, kick you in the ass so hard, doctors gotta DISEMBOWEL MY LEGS!/
I told you accept this BOUT AND YOUR DEAD, cause "bullets have alzheimers" the way they're in and OUT OF YOUR HEAD!/
I launch CONSECUTIVE ASSAULTS, EVIL IN TEXT, openmic's drug free so theres always NEGATIVE RESULTS when puttin 'V TO THE TEST!!'/
Better LEAVE OR GET STABBED/CUT, if your sick-its-disguised, quit-with-the-lies get BEATEN AND CLAPPED WHAT!!!/
Im a DEMON THIS FAG SUCKS, hunger? you'll have to tag-TEAM WITH THOSE WACK FUCKS just to EVEN THE MATCHUP!/
Im CLEANING THE FACTS UP, just cause you got piles of ray allen posters under yer pillow dont MEAN THAT YOU STACK BUCKS!/
i suggest you AMATEURS STOP or get DISMANTLED WITH SHOTS i PLAN TO GET PROPS/
Fucking Faggot, word is your crew gives more "hand jobs" than MANICURE SHOPS!!!/
CHILDREN FEAR, in SKILLED AFFAIRS i barely spit, niggas get cold CHILLS WITH STARES/
and fucking KILL THIS QUEER when i "empty shots" like syringes FILLED WITH AIR!!!/


i didnt like dis 1
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Postby walend » Dec 6th, '05, 10:16

cool shit, got some audio recordings?
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 6th, '05, 20:37

So who's the poor man those rhymes are stolen from?
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Postby AspirinE » Dec 6th, '05, 20:45

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Postby Coccoa » Dec 6th, '05, 20:56

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarght not again!!! i knew it
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Postby AspirinE » Dec 6th, '05, 21:00

V-DOG wrote:you better CHECK WHO YOUR TALKING TO, yer cliques straight "pussy with beef" like LESBIAN BARBEQUES!/
yer RECORD IS GARBAGE DUDE, exchanging THREATS IS IMPROPABLE i'll go to halloween DRESSED IN YOUR CARCUSS OOPS!/
Im an EXORCIST SPARKING FEUDS my EFFORTLESS THOUGHTS AND SPEWS, are ridiculously greulsome, hoped you skipped BREAKFAST AND BROUGHT A FEW extra INTESTINES IT'S AWFULLY
CRUDE even the DEVIL WOULD COUGH AND PUKE!/
REPPING REMARKABLE, my EXCELLENT ARSENAL will you have your body LEFT IN A DARKENED TOMB, and i never "gave a fuck" my squads not SUCCESSFUL AS 'PROSTITUTES'!/

plain and simply ***** V-DOGS THE ANSWER, started out STARVING FOR CHANCES but im "here(hair) now" SOLVING THE CANCER/
My verse is the SPARK OF DISASTER, wanna get some "shit off your chest?" koo, stuff your HEART IN A PAMPER!/
My shells, are HOLLOW AND LEAD, kick you in the ass so hard, doctors gotta DISEMBOWEL MY LEGS!/
I told you accept this BOUT AND YOUR DEAD, cause "bullets have alzheimers" the way they're in and OUT OF YOUR HEAD!/
I launch CONSECUTIVE ASSAULTS, EVIL IN TEXT, openmic's drug free so theres always NEGATIVE RESULTS when puttin 'V TO THE TEST!!'/
Better LEAVE OR GET STABBED/CUT, if your sick-its-disguised, quit-with-the-lies get BEATEN AND CLAPPED WHAT!!!/
Im a DEMON THIS FAG SUCKS, hunger? you'll have to tag-TEAM WITH THOSE WACK FUCKS just to EVEN THE MATCHUP!/
Im CLEANING THE FACTS UP, just cause you got piles of ray allen posters under yer pillow dont MEAN THAT YOU STACK BUCKS!/
i suggest you AMATEURS STOP or get DISMANTLED WITH SHOTS i PLAN TO GET PROPS/
Fucking Faggot, word is your crew gives more "hand jobs" than MANICURE SHOPS!!!/
CHILDREN FEAR, in SKILLED AFFAIRS i barely spit, ***** get cold CHILLS WITH STARES/
and fucking KILL THIS QUEER when i "empty shots" like syringes FILLED WITH AIR!!!/




X~CiDe~aL wrote:yer RECORD IS GARBAGE DUDE, exchanging THREATS IS IMPROPABLE i'll go to halloween DRESSED IN YOUR CARCUSS OOPS!//
Im an EXORCIST SPARKING FEUDS my EFFORTLESS THOUGHTS AND SPEWS, are ridiculously greulsome, hoped you skipped BREAKFAST AND BROUGHT A FEW extra INTESTINES IT'S AWFULLY
CRUDE even the DEVIL WOULD COUGH AND PUKE!//
REPPING REMARKABLE, my EXCELLENT ARSENAL will have your body LEFT IN A DARKENED TOMB, and i never "gave a fuck" my squads not SUCCESSFUL AS 'PROSTITUTES'!//
plain and simply nigga X-Cide~al THA ANSWER, started out STARVING FOR CHANCES but im "here(hair) now" SOLVING THE CANCER//
My verse is the SPARK OF DISASTER, wanna get some "shit off your chest?" koo, stuff your HEART IN A PAMPER!//
My shells, are HOLLOW AND LEAD, kick you in the ass so hard, doctors gotta DISEMBOWEL MY LEGS!//
I told you accept this BOUT AND YOUR DEAD, cause "bullets have alzheimers" the way they're in and OUT OF YOUR HEAD!//
I launch CONSECUTIVE ASSAULTS, EVIL IN TEXT, BATTLE BOARDS drug free so theres always NEGATIVE RESULTS when puttin 'P TO THE TEST!!'//
Better LEAVE OR GET STABBED/CUT, if your sick-its-disguised, quit-with-the-lies get BEATEN AND CLAPPED WHAT!!!//
Im a DEMON THIS FAG SUCKS, MADE-NIGGAZ? you'll have to tag-TEAM WITH THOSE WACK FUCKS just to EVEN THE MATCHUP!//
Im CLEANING THE FACTS UP, just cause you got piles of ray allen posters under yer pillow dont MEAN THAT YOU STACK BUCKS!//
i suggest you AMATEURS STOP or get DISMANTLED WITH SHOTS i PLAN TO GET PROPS//
Fucking Faggot, word is your crew gives more "hand jobs" than MANICURE SHOPS!!!//
CHILDREN FEAR, in SKILLED AFFAIRS i barely spit, niggas get cold CHILLS WITH STARES//
and fucking KILL THIS QUEER when i "empty shots" like syringes FILLED WITH AIR!!!//





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NOW UNLESS V-DOG, ur the same guy, U JUST GOT OWNED!
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 6th, '05, 21:12

Altho i dont like Gayceon Taylor..i ll quote him this time.

"Give him a headband to cover up the holes in his head
He a dead man..."

V-Rat is gone.
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Postby SoniK » Dec 6th, '05, 21:26

HAHAHAHAHA mutha fukers talkin about startiin up labels wen they be stealin rhymes and tryna sound hard

fuk u man, i'll battle u and win over and over....haha No1 can hold you?

haha no1 can hold me motherfuker, ghetto...get ur suburb face smakd twice and three times for disrespectin tha code and conduct

declarin war, one by one i'll knock u out like Ali, and u George Foreman dying on ur own "grills"

hahaha Em Young, u see these mutha fukers man?

Big up Anti Nazi League, Nation of Islam, I read that shit, im an intellectual and got more knowledge than wot ya bitches giv

peace out
R.i.p big proof

what now??
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 6th, '05, 22:29

I see the shit.

But who said the burbs aint tight? You can get alot of bang bang there too. Redneck cowboys lmao. :p :p :p Gringos!! Desperado del Cuba
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Postby walend » Dec 6th, '05, 22:33

hehe no rhyme is safe for our detectives :wave:
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 6th, '05, 22:38

Nope!!! Why you think they call us hiphop police.
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Postby Nu Syd » Dec 7th, '05, 03:28

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Postby $0 R3@L » Dec 7th, '05, 03:49

r.i.p v dog :readguidelines:
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