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Postby thetruthisback » Feb 9th, '07, 18:57

C-Game wrote:
$0 R3@L wrote:
C-Game wrote:
thetruthisback wrote:my advice to you would be to shorten your lines and add more complex rhyming cause if you leave it like that it's sort of simple :happy:


hey steve i thought ur ban was over already...


why he banned? :unsure:


lol over some bet with j_shady...nuttin serious


i created as new account lmao i was impaitent and i wanted to go on here lol
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Postby Marth » Feb 9th, '07, 21:34

yes and you got right :wave:
The world has gone crazy like eminem on kim
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Postby DjSnax » Feb 9th, '07, 22:13

Jmgeezy wrote:fuck u ur rhymes sucked mine are good

i want shows from the front to the back to be packed,
i want to be on top of the world in fact like an acrobat



lol uhh.... sure.... keep thinkin that way...

i love it when basic shitty writers think they're the best. Makes me laugh how easily they're pissed off when somebody makes a suggestion or points something out.
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