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[shady_aftermathzz]

uh uhhh
not really??
explain cuz' i too think therez a lot diffrence btn creative writing n' battles

oh btw Blind, hot shit, keep'em coming bru' n' i aint good at giving feeds n' reviews, thats good shit, enough said/ keep it up/
peace

[4D]

The good thing about simple rhymes is that they are alternately and it's really sound good on the flow, you just accentuate this rhymes. It's like Eminem's song "The way I am" "I sit BACK with this PACK of zig-ZAG and this BAG".

You're missing the multies, which is why you're not trying them in your own verses. This isthe way you should have quoted that Eminem line. "I SIT BACK with THIS PACK of ZIG-ZAGs and THIS BAG". See what I mean, nowadays you don't get away with simplified rhyme styles. You gotta up your game, next time you listen to an Eminem song, you might notice that it's not just the last word in a line rhyming with the last word in the next line, it's sometimes the last 2 or 3 words rhming with the last 2 or 3 in the next line. It's complex rhyming and if you want to really improve at writing lyrics you need to focus on many things, and this one of them.

Keep up the effort

[Tash8]

like 4d said, you notice how it's really complex? that makes it sound much better

what if he said

I stay back with this pack, of these zags and a bag

doesn't work, complex rhymes make stuff sound better.

[Blind]

You're missing the multies, which is why you're not trying them in your own verses. This isthe way you should have quoted that Eminem line. "I SIT BACK with THIS PACK of ZIG-ZAGs and THIS BAG". See what I mean, nowadays you don't get away with simplified rhyme styles. You gotta up your game, next time you listen to an Eminem song, you might notice that it's not just the last word in a line rhyming with the last word in the next line, it's sometimes the last 2 or 3 words rhming with the last 2 or 3 in the next line. It's complex rhyming and if you want to really improve at writing lyrics you need to focus on many things, and this one of them. Keep up the effort

Yeah, now I noticed. I'm just experimenting, I promise all of you, my next shit will be much better, now I'm doing records on one of my most succesful song, hope ya'll can check my flow and beat that I made by myself. See ya'll on the Audio Stage! Peace!