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Re: Outro to Rap

Postby 4D » Feb 3rd, '08, 20:09

The rhyme structure looks a little weird in text, but reading it I can see how it would work in audio, depending on the beat. I agree with BAr a little bit, you shouldn't need to bold,capitalise or underline any words to prove your rhymes, they should be self evident. It's something I used to do when I first started dropping rhymes on here (Search back for nostalgia if ye want), but eventually got lazy dong it, and realised it's kinda lame having to highlight your rhymes. If you have the rhymes in the right places, with the right amounts of syllables and vowel sounds, they will be obvious, no matter how complex the verse.

P.s Good job Tash, I like the lyrics. But quitting is lame, it's not as if yourself or any of us has had a career, lol. :)
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Re: Outro to Rap

Postby Tash8 » Feb 3rd, '08, 20:29

lol 4d, u know it's hard to find a topic to rap on, so this was just a practice.

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Re: Outro to Rap

Postby 4D » Feb 3rd, '08, 23:14

Gotcha man, in that case, nice work. :y:
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Re: Outro to Rap

Postby Kez » Feb 16th, '08, 03:11

People remember what track these lyrics are for now? :whistle:
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Re: Outro to Rap

Postby Tash8 » Feb 16th, '08, 03:55

huh?
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Re: Outro to Rap

Postby Xray » Feb 16th, '08, 05:10

kez was saying do you know what song these lyrics were used in aka the prequel :y:
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Re: Outro to Rap

Postby Tash8 » Feb 16th, '08, 05:37

Xray wrote:kez was saying do you know what song these lyrics were used in aka the prequel :y:


gotya :y:
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Re: Outro to Rap

Postby Xray » Feb 16th, '08, 06:11

good :shifty:
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Re: Outro to Rap

Postby Ethos » Feb 18th, '08, 04:44

I just got done listening to the track and your verse was sick. can't wait for more. :worship:
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Re: Outro to Rap

Postby Xray » Feb 18th, '08, 09:15

Syanied wrote:I just got done listening to the track and your verse was sick. can't wait for more. :worship:

did you forget to feed the prequel thread? :shifty:
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Re: Outro to Rap

Postby Kez » Feb 21st, '08, 18:46

Xray wrote:
Syanied wrote:I just got done listening to the track and your verse was sick. can't wait for more. :worship:

did you forget to feed the prequel thread? :shifty:
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Re: Outro to Rap

Postby Tash8 » Mar 2nd, '08, 02:43

Kez wrote:
Xray wrote:
Syanied wrote:I just got done listening to the track and your verse was sick. can't wait for more. :worship:

did you forget to feed the prequel thread? :shifty:
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