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Re: UNTITLED

Postby Crossova16 » Feb 25th, '08, 16:25

shytt was wackk b...b eazyyy
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Re: UNTITLED

Postby Robbie G » Feb 25th, '08, 19:09

Huge props man. :worship:

i remember your first drop thinking you weren't too good but you've improved a ton and I enjoy your stuff now. :y:
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Re: UNTITLED

Postby Arabian Shady » Feb 27th, '08, 13:39

new stuff! lol

@crossova: wtf,its wack???? r u shittin me man??

@shadie babie:lol, thnx for chekin it out man,i'm glad u didnt judge me by my first,it shows ur character,thnx for the review

peace :b:

MORE REVIEWS PLEASEEE!!! :worship:
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Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: UNTITLED

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 3rd, '08, 12:45

B.U.M.P
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: UNTITLED

Postby Epidemik » Mar 4th, '08, 02:07

Lemme spit some shit somethin that no one's ever done
Ma background reveals i'm frm the 0-9-7-1
Livin a life full of crime and the lies that i've spun
out of bounds on the grounds that i'm carryin a gun
see you find me wid a mic,standin under this light
but u've failed to realise,like shady I am white
I'ma spit n i'll bite,fist you down like the tike

thought it was dope up to that point..
overall a good drop man! i liked it alot!
keep it commin :y:
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Re: UNTITLED

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 4th, '08, 09:30

thnx for the review epidemic
if you dont mind can i ask wat went wrong after that point,i mean only so that i can improve
apprciate you chekin it out
peace :b:
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: UNTITLED

Postby Epidemik » Mar 4th, '08, 17:28

just kinda found it harder to keep the flow after that point.. (which could be me just not readin it right)
i know reading it online is way different then how it could actually sound when your spittin it..
but ya.. overall just thought the beginning was best. :y:
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Re: UNTITLED

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 6th, '08, 17:15

haha allright, I get it,its all kl
peace
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: UNTITLED

Postby preest » Mar 14th, '08, 18:16

Yo I think the flows a bit off at some points but other than that it a nice drop, you should be proud of!
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Re: UNTITLED

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 16th, '08, 18:25

wow thnx bro,
new here,well then wellcome
peace out

feeds?
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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