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Re: spit a verse

Postby M-Pyre » Mar 22nd, '08, 21:19

more like eminem^ :8)
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Re: spit a verse

Postby M-Pyre » Jun 3rd, '08, 00:41

the semantics crash with the pencils, a man gets trashed in the men's room/
I'll smack this one back in this accentual rap as I lend him a clap/
that will send him on tracks which will grand him a back with ribs snapped in one half/
which is actually one actual fact, I'll gradually handle all pacts/
whether their cowards with a mack, or some clowns with an act/
I proudly present this battle-rapper on crack, brag, and 'll blast ya cap/
with bullets smothered in Bacillus anthracis, so run ya mouth slow, cause this is ya last lap/
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Re: spit a verse

Postby judah » Jun 4th, '08, 16:40

Here I go, like a snake encarnating the DIABLO
If u smell me u go nuts, call me Pablo
there they go, searching for fortune like Nico'sCage looking for treasure
But Nico's did for love, u just after pleasure
u go get a car so ur friends say that dude is cool
ladies u look at u, but u just acting a fool
u aint being u, u being what they want u to be
this is the true test that u face, u c?
life is a maze, u aint got no line to go after
now u have the do's but no satisfation... no Big Poppa
there they go living a fake life full of lust
u better be good cause u aint nothing but dust
U can only grow if u learn from your past
mistake only once cause u the fool when u do it twice
live life allright but dont mislive other peoples live
because u eventualy fade like the polos Ice...
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Re: spit a verse

Postby judah » Jun 4th, '08, 16:43

Chet wrote:
shadyallday wrote:i'm needed in the game like a young michael jordan/ i'm hearin shit from rappers that don't even pick up the mic that often/ man, i'm quite exhausted/ all i do is kill the game, so they gotta bury me with a mic in my coffin/ i don't care if i'm liked or supported/ just don't say shit when u see the red light, i'm recording/ sometimes i feel like i got a red dot on my forehead, one wrong word and my career is dead/ i guess at times the game is evil/ but i still gotta entertain these people/ as long as i'm ahead of the game its peaceful/ i can't even enjoy the breathing room/ if i do all these other cats will start squeezin through/ but that'll never happen i was made for rappin/ our acquaintance may have been a fatal attraction/ my love/hate relationship with rap may have been a major distraction/ but my words are my weapons, and they speak louder than my actions/


you remind me of Jay-Z alot. :y:


That's Shadys like in my view... the 90's shady.
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Re: spit a verse

Postby Kosovic » Jun 4th, '08, 17:02

Kathe zontani emfanisi, simeni apantisi
Simeni antipalon eksafanisi me mia sinantisi
Vita Pis, enantion olon parte theseis
Ine paghidha me leksis ki esy tha pesis

I omadha itan, ine, ke tha ine mia dhihos
Adynamia, thyra, ikosi-tria, mipos
Exete provlima pu panta im' apo pano
Kathe monada pathos ke lathos dhen kano
Ghiati to niotho prota, meta to ghrafo vlaka
Ipa dhen pigha s' eteries ghiati eidha tin faka
Polla les ma polla dhen kanis malaka
Alithia leo ghiafto kano ta koumanta
I moni ghighantes ektos apo mas, i ghighantes tou cash
Mehri simera dhen metrame kameno match
Asto min to pis, ghia tous V-V-V-V-Vita Pis
Ise toso masturomenos pu dhen ghamas
Loghos eneninta mires, me rymes dhinamites
Kanoune ghyres ta pithikia tin eidhan alites
Ap'tin Athina se oli tin elladha
Akyron, Triloghia, i omadhara

Kathe zontani emfanisi, simeni apantisi
Simeni antipalon eksafanisi me mia sinantisi
Vita Pis, enantion olon parte theseis
Ine paghidha me leksis ki esy tha pesis
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