Runnin'

[Solace]

To me it flows nicely, but at parts i speed up my words or just pause for a couple seconds. i do listen to royce btw, i usually listen to the lyrics but not where/how he uses them. Ill try to do that next time i listen to him. But how are they unoriginal? They're based on Runnin' so theyre focusing on the same subject. And thanks everyone for support and tips.

[Darkblade44431]

never heard the runnin song, but i thought the rhymes could be better, a bit too simple in my opinion. however, i can't help but think that you're faking.....if ur not...i take that back, but it just doesn't seem like it considering so many people lie about that shit nowadays. I think you should be yourself with it, don't try to talk about somethin that you don't know about. Record it though, i might like it better.

[Solace]

How am i faking something i never said i did? I just said its based on Runnin' and its supposed to have a thug kinda theme. No ive never been through that, hell i havent been through a lot. The stuff ive been through seems minor and i dont really see how i could make a rhyme out of that. I dont have a mic so i cant record, and my parents are too cheap to buy one. And yeah i agree the rhymes are very amateur.

edit: at your offer, id love to, but as i said i dont have a mic so i cant. For now the best i can do is write.