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Re: Hey Check Out This Jam I came up with

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 4th, '08, 23:37

Darkblade44431 wrote:Glad i could be of some help.

yeah i just need a subject

im thinkin either gaby (this one slut that really pissed me off)
carmen and karla (these girls i like, but i dont think i need love songs right now)
some sort of story

well what kind of songs do you guys like?
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Re: Hey Check Out This Jam I came up with

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jul 5th, '08, 00:21

not love songs, but if it really is a good story, i'd like to hear that.
grr...check out my stuff in creative writing, "what happened" and "8 lines added"
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Re: Hey Check Out This Jam I came up with

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 5th, '08, 00:26

Darkblade44431 wrote:not love songs, but if it really is a good story, i'd like to hear that.
grr...check out my stuff in creative writing, "what happened" and "8 lines added"

well writing about gaby would be like writing the song Kim so ill do an anger one haha
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Re: Hey Check Out This Jam I came up with

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jul 5th, '08, 00:31

i'd like a song like that.
why the hell do you keep avoiding the secondary part of my posts!
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Re: Hey Check Out This Jam I came up with

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 5th, '08, 00:37

Darkblade44431 wrote:i'd like a song like that.
why the hell do you keep avoiding the secondary part of my posts!

cuz i dont know wut ur talking about
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Re: Hey Check Out This Jam I came up with

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jul 5th, '08, 01:00

i just want you to comment on some of my stuff in the creative writing section.
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Re: Hey Check Out This Jam I came up with

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 5th, '08, 01:04

Darkblade44431 wrote:i just want you to comment on some of my stuff in the creative writing section.

i dnt see ur stuff is wat im sayin
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Re: Hey Check Out This Jam I came up with

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jul 5th, '08, 01:22

look for stuff in this section that says by "Darkblade44431" such as "What Happened?", i'd really appreciate it, i cud use feedback.
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Re: Hey Check Out This Jam I came up with

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 5th, '08, 01:27

Darkblade44431 wrote:look for stuff in this section that says by "Darkblade44431" such as "What Happened?", i'd really appreciate it, i cud use feedback.

wait i did give feedback
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Re: Hey Check Out This Jam I came up with

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jul 5th, '08, 01:31

oh, did you? i didn't remember.
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Re: Hey Check Out This Jam I came up with

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 5th, '08, 02:11

Darkblade44431 wrote:oh, did you? i didn't remember.

jeah
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