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Re: FLOW

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 8th, '08, 20:57

JMG wrote:well bein the best on tr i think i should be held to higher standards

the best on tr? :laughing:

seriously "every fucking line ryhmed" no it didnt

ur flows is pretty good

but was the 50 cent line at the end really needed?
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Re: FLOW

Postby JMG » Jul 8th, '08, 21:00

not one rhyme was inspired by 50 cent and yes everything rhymed.
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Re: FLOW

Postby Kosovic » Jul 8th, '08, 21:01

JMG wrote:not one rhyme was inspired by 50 cent and yes everything rhymed.


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Re: FLOW

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 8th, '08, 21:44

JMG wrote:not one rhyme was inspired by 50 cent and yes everything rhymed.

if shadymademe didnt explain it right no u didnt i can state two lines off of that that dont ryhme for shit
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Re: FLOW

Postby JMG » Jul 8th, '08, 23:14

comin from ur wack ass that means nothin
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Re: FLOW

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 8th, '08, 23:39

JMG wrote:comin from ur wack ass that means nothin

my wack ass? ur a poser and i aint so that makes perfect sense and if it doesnt read it again.
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Re: FLOW

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Re: FLOW

Postby Solace » Jul 9th, '08, 00:40

Kosovic wrote:Image

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okay why dont you two (JMG, Toy Soldier) have a rap battle? I vouch for Toy Soldier :flower:
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Re: FLOW

Postby Kosovic » Jul 9th, '08, 01:08

i dont battle rap....and i especially dont battle rap in site with kids who think that hiphop >>> dogshit >>> rest of life.
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Re: FLOW

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 9th, '08, 01:15

Kosovic wrote:i dont battle rap....and i especially dont battle rap in site with kids who think that hiphop >>> dogshit >>> rest of life.

he meant me and JMG

and thank you SMM
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Re: FLOW

Postby Solace » Jul 9th, '08, 01:19

The Toy Soldier wrote:
Kosovic wrote:i dont battle rap....and i especially dont battle rap in site with kids who think that hiphop >>> dogshit >>> rest of life.

he meant me and JMG

and thank you SMM

welcome.
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Re: FLOW

Postby Kosovic » Jul 9th, '08, 01:21

A whatever, you know where my vote goes.
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Re: FLOW

Postby JMG » Jul 9th, '08, 01:22

haha toy solider dont make my die in laughs
ill burn ur ass with a magnafying glass
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Re: FLOW

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 9th, '08, 01:23

JMG wrote:haha toy solider dont make my die in laughs
ill burn ur ass with a magnafying glass

dont say corny shit unless its a battle cuz ill be laughing when i find out im taller than you

magnifying glass? what you gonna do? burn ur dick?
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Re: FLOW

Postby Solace » Jul 9th, '08, 01:40

The Toy Soldier wrote:
JMG wrote:haha toy solider dont make my die in laughs
ill burn ur ass with a magnafying glass

dont say corny shit unless its a battle cuz ill be laughing when i find out im taller than you

magnifying glass? what you gonna do? burn ur dick?

LOL someone just got burnneeddd...JMG you want some ice wit that? and your trying to diss Toy Soldier, you even had spelling mistakes "haha toy solider dont make my die in laughs. ill burn ur ass with a magnafying glass"
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