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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 9th, '08, 02:14

Kosovic wrote:
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Kosovic wrote:Awww this thread is a perfect example of newbie fights.

*sits and watches*

Beer anyone?


wow u actually pay attention to post count i thought u were more fucked up than that kosovic


Not post count. Registration dates.

hmmm very keen so to say
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby SkinNBlista » Jul 9th, '08, 02:22

:y:
sweet
I enjoyed that
Whateva u wanna say, go ahead coz we dont play.
Every word taken to heart, supersensitive, arent u smart.
So how next r u gonna use it, laugh in my face is to abuse it.
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 9th, '08, 02:25

SkinNBlista wrote::y:
sweet
I enjoyed that

thank you
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby JMG » Jul 9th, '08, 02:26

The Toy Soldier wrote:
JMG wrote:we will see who ends up on top we will c

i never said i was better than you come on ur 18 and ur getting mad and causing a fret cuz i said u didnt ryhme for a lot of lines u call it an insult i call it feedback u can say my shit suks then fine say it ill just try and make it better that simple


im just tryin to get it though peoples thick skull that i threw struture out the window. im focused on lyrics and flow.
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 9th, '08, 02:38

JMG wrote:
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JMG wrote:we will see who ends up on top we will c

i never said i was better than you come on ur 18 and ur getting mad and causing a fret cuz i said u didnt ryhme for a lot of lines u call it an insult i call it feedback u can say my shit suks then fine say it ill just try and make it better that simple


im just tryin to get it though peoples thick skull that i threw struture out the window. im focused on lyrics and flow.

so it isnt rap cuz i mean the flow was good im just saying if ur gonna call it rap thats a whole new deal
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby Solace » Jul 9th, '08, 02:39

JMG wrote:
The Toy Soldier wrote:
JMG wrote:we will see who ends up on top we will c

i never said i was better than you come on ur 18 and ur getting mad and causing a fret cuz i said u didnt ryhme for a lot of lines u call it an insult i call it feedback u can say my shit suks then fine say it ill just try and make it better that simple


im just tryin to get it though peoples thick skull that i threw struture out the window. im focused on lyrics and flow.

if your trying to get it through our skulls that it doesnt rhyme. Why say it rhymes perfectly? :unsure:
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby JMG » Jul 9th, '08, 02:47

no its rap, but what im tryin to stress is think of this as its bein heard not bein read. i no that dosent make sence since its suppose to be read but it would look all sloppy if i tried to line it up better. so if u dont get when im sayin then wait till i record it then tell me what u think.
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 9th, '08, 02:55

JMG wrote:no its rap, but what im tryin to stress is think of this as its bein heard not bein read. i no that dosent make sence since its suppose to be read but it would look all sloppy if i tried to line it up better. so if u dont get when im sayin then wait till i record it then tell me what u think.

k ill do that

im just waiting to see if i get better reviews on this shit to see if me and my bud record it
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby Kosovic » Jul 9th, '08, 03:07

Ok now it got boring. If i dont see blood and teeth flying off, i aint keeping on with this thread.
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 9th, '08, 03:09

Kosovic wrote:Ok now it got boring. If i dont see blood and teeth flying off, i aint keeping on with this thread.

if blood happens will u get positive towards feedback?
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby Kosovic » Jul 9th, '08, 03:14

The Toy Soldier wrote:
Kosovic wrote:Ok now it got boring. If i dont see blood and teeth flying off, i aint keeping on with this thread.

if blood happens will u get positive towards feedback?


I am not positive? Is that what u implying??
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 9th, '08, 03:23

Kosovic wrote:
The Toy Soldier wrote:
Kosovic wrote:Ok now it got boring. If i dont see blood and teeth flying off, i aint keeping on with this thread.

if blood happens will u get positive towards feedback?


I am not positive? Is that what u implying??

basically yeah and uve stated it urself
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby Kosovic » Jul 9th, '08, 03:44

Hmmm....i am positive, i am as positive a man can get.


When the topic is me.
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 9th, '08, 04:00

Kosovic wrote:Hmmm....i am positive, i am as positive a man can get.


When the topic is me.

ok well pretend the topic is u
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Re: Ok I tried Harder this time

Postby Kosovic » Jul 9th, '08, 04:12

Hmmm...u have a point there.
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