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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Solace » Dec 14th, '08, 02:46

i see nothing wrong with MC Anonymous's writing. Its more than perfect.
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Kez » Dec 14th, '08, 03:01

MC Anonymous wrote:.... Your retarded mind can't comprehend the meaning of such words. Which is why you don't like them.
Don't EVER try to debunk someone who is EONS ahead of you in lyrical dexterity.


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Oh and @ Chet, yeah i was gonna leave it at that but i saw that image and it fit perfect. So i'll quote what i said, and say we've got another Rain Matrix on our hands.
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby neb121 » Dec 14th, '08, 03:03

i didnt say there was anything wrong wit it. it was good. what ppl are allowed to critisise my raps but i cant say something about someone elses. i wasnt saying anything bad. i just said when u rhyme to many big words in a row it doesnt sound good on audio is all i said. but its fine. thats his style. so keep it up :y:
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Kez » Dec 14th, '08, 03:04

neb121 wrote:i didnt say there was anything wrong wit it. it was good. what ppl are allowed to critisise my raps but i cant say something about someone elses. i wasnt saying anything bad. i just said when u rhyme to many big words in a row it doesnt sound good on audio is all i said. but its fine. thats his style. so keep it up :y:


You didn't do anything wrong, all you did was give your opinion.

If he can't handle the fact that some people aren't going to like his shit, he's in the wrong game.
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 14th, '08, 03:29

Kez wrote:
neb121 wrote:i didnt say there was anything wrong wit it. it was good. what ppl are allowed to critisise my raps but i cant say something about someone elses. i wasnt saying anything bad. i just said when u rhyme to many big words in a row it doesnt sound good on audio is all i said. but its fine. thats his style. so keep it up :y:


You didn't do anything wrong, all you did was give your opinion.

If he can't handle the fact that some people aren't going to like his shit, he's in the wrong game.

lmao, I'm not big headed, far from it.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby neb121 » Dec 14th, '08, 03:34

Kez wrote:
neb121 wrote:i didnt say there was anything wrong wit it. it was good. what ppl are allowed to critisise my raps but i cant say something about someone elses. i wasnt saying anything bad. i just said when u rhyme to many big words in a row it doesnt sound good on audio is all i said. but its fine. thats his style. so keep it up :y:


You didn't do anything wrong, all you did was give your opinion.

If he can't handle the fact that some people aren't going to like his shit, he's in the wrong game.


thank you. and i wasnt even dissing his raps. i think hes good. hes also still young.
just like not everyone is gonna like my music. everyone has there own opinion. i think hes good i was just givin him some advice. he doesnt have to take it.
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Solace » Dec 14th, '08, 03:35

neb121 wrote:
Kez wrote:
neb121 wrote:i didnt say there was anything wrong wit it. it was good. what ppl are allowed to critisise my raps but i cant say something about someone elses. i wasnt saying anything bad. i just said when u rhyme to many big words in a row it doesnt sound good on audio is all i said. but its fine. thats his style. so keep it up :y:


You didn't do anything wrong, all you did was give your opinion.

If he can't handle the fact that some people aren't going to like his shit, he's in the wrong game.


thank you. and i wasnt even dissing his raps. i think hes good. hes also still young.
just like not everyone is gonna like my music. everyone has there own opinion. i think hes good i was just givin him some advice. he doesnt have to take it.

But your advice was to dumb down his rhymes :unsure:
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby James R. » Dec 14th, '08, 03:36

So... you know... I get that neb121 vs the forum is the new fad and all... but take this shit fucking elsewhere. Thanks.
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby neb121 » Dec 14th, '08, 03:40

^ how bout take it no where and stop.

god i feel famous :whistle:
leave it for when i am guys :p

and i wasnt downing his music. i said he is good.

thanks james :hug:
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 14th, '08, 03:43

sounds like good times to me, it definitly reads like good rap :y: :y:
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby James R. » Dec 14th, '08, 03:54

Thanks Rain
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 14th, '08, 03:57

Rain Matrix wrote:sounds like good times to me, it definitly reads like good rap :y: :y:

thanks bro
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby lilrossy » Dec 14th, '08, 06:04

nice work guys. best shit i've read in ages. :worship:
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby James R. » Dec 14th, '08, 06:09

I appreciate it pplz.
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Boston » Dec 14th, '08, 15:17

straight up, i dont even like you mc anonymous, im just telling you now

i don't think you suck but i also don't think your good. you do use big words for no reason, some people really cant comprehend what you are trying to say so they can't enjoy what you write, if you record, they wont like what you record. people will call you wannabe cannibus. you DO need to dumb down your shit whether you like it or not. i dont know if your doing it to try to be dope or w/e the reason is, but its like rhyming words in a way.
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