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Postby j_shady » Nov 29th, '05, 10:04

yeah they shouldnt cuz like Tom already said, he does not feel like that anymore about those people..so for So Real to react the way he did was in my opinion pointless cuz he got mad off of something old
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Postby $0 R3@L » Nov 29th, '05, 11:35

agreed,

at the time of reading it though i was pissed off.As im sure whoever else got mentioned.Oh well its bout time internet beef was layed to rest....

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Postby 4D » Nov 29th, '05, 12:26

Thomas:
Fordie, what are you now..TWENTY-NINE?/
There are 15 year olds here writing just as good if not better LINES/


How`s that not hate.

look, you think you`re better than me?
If you wanna disrespect me, call me out in a battle and i`ll destroy you!!
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Postby $0 R3@L » Nov 29th, '05, 13:03

^^^ word
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Postby shadypelkey » Nov 29th, '05, 13:40

I think someone's a bit full of themselves eh? but anyaways prety good stuff, well atleast the first 10 lines couldnt be bother to read anymore :king:
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Postby AspirinE » Nov 29th, '05, 15:29

g_killa wrote:lol i never had the heart to tell asp bout fee me...

well or i liked him lookin dumb lmao

neway this beef thin has been blown up 2 much now ppl should hit the breaks and ignore beef then it will stop lmao wen i joined there was no beef then me and stealth started.................does that mean we are responsible lmao

neway i lernt from that time and thats why i aint holdin grudges wit ne of yall



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Postby Coccoa » Nov 29th, '05, 20:09

Ok you are fucked up now hijo de puta.
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Postby M.V.{PIMP} » Nov 29th, '05, 21:10

you ever heard of FLowin ?
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 29th, '05, 21:28

You know what it is.

Rhymes: Let's say you win me.
Flow: You got no flow at all. You wack.
Skills: None. You garbage.
Race: I wont comment that since it's not allowed.
Style: What style? You got nuffin.
Streets: You lose pal. They dont know you, ur nuffin. I am from Harlem, you're from Nu Jerzey.
Work: You just write your lil shit here. I had my mixtapes (including my tracks) listened by more than 100 people in Harlem.
Physical fight: You dont stand a chance against me.

You are just a wannabe rapper, prolly reading poetry and listening to sum music and doing bullshit behind your PC, writing you lil rhymes HOPING you gon be part of the hip hop nation, trying and trying. But you rly NUFFIN!!! V-Rat is more of a man than u are. Aron is more of a man than you are. Hayzi is more of a man that u r. And yeah i dont like none of them, but at least they dont hide, they dont pretend, they dont THINK they are "niggas". They aint, but they do their thang. And i still dont like them but you crossed the line. Do you wanna have a trip to Harlem? Do you wanna spit your rhymes in front of 20 Latins and 50 Blacks? Do you wanna diss me INSIDE THERE???? Huh??? It's easy to say that i aint got shit on u, it's easy to write this shit. But you just write this shit. You garbage. This was off the hook. You can write a million rhymes but you will never be what you tryina be.
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Postby HAYZI » Nov 29th, '05, 21:54

thomas your a dick for disin me, ive never dun shit to you exceopt give you one of my beats. i dont remember editin shit either, but most of all your a fuckin dick for dissin FORDIE hes been fuckin good to you you fuckin ungrateful cunt!
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Postby Shadyluva » Nov 29th, '05, 21:55

It was hott!

keep it up! every1 that raps on this site has creativity and r good
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Nov 29th, '05, 22:09

FORDIE wrote:Thomas:
Fordie, what are you now..TWENTY-NINE?/
There are 15 year olds here writing just as good if not better LINES/

How`s that not hate.
look, you think you`re better than me?
If you wanna disrespect me, call me out in a battle and i`ll destroy you!!

you somehow forgot to quote this part

but no hate I don
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Postby Shadyluva » Nov 29th, '05, 22:12

Do you wanna have a trip to Harlem? Do you wanna spit your rhymes in front of 20 Latins and 50 Blacks? Do you wanna diss me INSIDE THERE???? Huh???


yea my dad owns a pizzeria in harlem and it is bad, u wud not want to do nething stupid there, atleast i wudn't
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Nov 29th, '05, 22:15

Alyssa wrote:i was in it i was in it \(^_^)/
lol uno i cant battle for shit
but that was heaps fun ta read tho hun v. nice, hope ppl dont take it too serious

i know you can battle for shit. you were one of the best when you tried and could beat 3/4th or more of the people on this site with me included. and i hoped people wouldnt take it serious especially after explaining that i dont mean any of it now but i guess i was wrong...

Em_Young wrote:You know what it is.
Rhymes: Let's say you win me.
Flow: You got no flow at all. You wack.
Skills: None. You garbage.
Race: I wont comment that since it's not allowed.
Style: What style? You got nuffin.
Streets: You lose pal. They dont know you, ur nuffin. I am from Harlem, you're from Nu Jerzey.
Work: You just write your lil shit here. I had my mixtapes (including my tracks) listened by more than 100 people in Harlem.
Physical fight: You dont stand a chance against me.
You are just a wannabe rapper, prolly reading poetry and listening to sum music and doing bullshit behind your PC, writing you lil rhymes HOPING you gon be part of the hip hop nation, trying and trying. But you rly NUFFIN!!! V-Rat is more of a man than u are. Aron is more of a man than you are. Hayzi is more of a man that u r. And yeah i dont like none of them, but at least they dont hide, they dont pretend, they dont THINK they are "*****". They aint, but they do their thang. And i still dont like them but you crossed the line. Do you wanna have a trip to Harlem? Do you wanna spit your rhymes in front of 20 Latins and 50 Blacks? Do you wanna diss me INSIDE THERE???? Huh??? It's easy to say that i aint got shit on u, it's easy to write this shit. But you just write this shit. You garbage. This was off the hook. You can write a million rhymes but you will never be what you tryina be.


ok you got it all right. i could care less what you think and your right. i probally wouldn't say my rhymes in front of 4 of my friends let alone 70 people i never met. i have no hate now towards you and respect your work. we aint bonding was better than any song you had on your mixtape and bad guy or whatever its called is a real good song.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Nov 29th, '05, 22:21

j_shady wrote:i gotta give it up man, your sick...thoguh you dissed my peeps its all good, cuz its all in fun right..keep up the good shit

ASPIRINE wrote:Tom explained it to u ... ohh and i remember u was like "OK diss me i dont care"
Great shit TOM


Thanks guys for gib=ving your opinions.

$0 R3@L wrote:agreed,
at the time of reading it though i was pissed off.As im sure whoever else got mentioned.Oh well its bout time internet beef was layed to rest....
Peace out ppl :wave:


ok good. no beef between us. i got no hate towards you. i actually enjoyed listening to your songs posting. you are a lot better now than when you first started so dont take anything i said seriously.

M.V.{PIMP} wrote:you ever heard of FLowin ?

have you ever heard of posting some of your rhymes?
thanks for giving your opinion but you havent posted any of your work yet so i can't judge you now. but your probally better than i am...
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