Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

[Sam.]

Hey! Did you get my punchlines?

Yeah but not all of them. I'm not great at catching punchlines anyway so the ones I caught I caught after 2 reads and shit haha. That's why I never criticize punchlines unless shit's really, really corny and whack lol, I'm not an expert at that, even some dumb ass punchlines might impress me like Royce's Mario Brothers line @ I'm On Everything, so you'll have to rely on the others on this category.

Thanks man.
You've been of a great help to me.

May God bless your soul and lace your shoe of life with happiness, so that you may walk your way to prosperity.

[Sam.]

Thanks B.

[Midnight EyeZ]

Got your PM but like you said, couldn't reply...Tried sending the same message about 10 times before I realised lol...

Haven't had a chance to read it all yet coz I'm not at home and reading on my mobile's long, but I'm dropping a new track on Monday so if there's no problem with feeding a written with a track I'll do that...

But I'll check it out properly when I get online from a comp...

[Sam.]

Got your PM but like you said, couldn't reply...Tried sending the same message about 10 times before I realised lol...

Haven't had a chance to read it all yet coz I'm not at home and reading on my mobile's long, but I'm dropping a new track on Monday so if there's no problem with feeding a written with a track I'll do that...

But I'll check it out properly when I get online from a comp...

Thanks man, you can feed this when you want to, but please do.But I think you might wanna add a link from the Audio Section too(with this) next time you drop an Audio Track, I'll feed that track though.

[Enimee]

damn yall two deaf stepped it up with this one.

sam your vocab and imagery really had me goin through the whole verse all out, definilty real deep and sadistic type feel, the only thing that i would have liked a little from use is flow...but thats just my reading interpretation, id love to hear this audio

spyder those lyrics were epic man, the jesus moses line is needs some honorable mention that was dope..well done man i like the way you strung together multis and drug out rhyme schemes to complete your thoughts...almost perfect verse man the only thing i would improve would be your idea's...what i mean is it seemed like you rushed some of your concepts just to finish the line, but it had potential to be much better for instance where you had the "last words of a dying jason line" i think you coulda played with that a lil more....other then that fuckin perfect man


god damn awesome collab man this shit was raw

[Sam.]

damn yall two deaf stepped it up with this one.

sam your vocab and imagery really had me goin through the whole verse all out, definilty real deep and sadistic type feel, the only thing that i would have liked a little from use is flow...but thats just my reading interpretation, id love to hear this audio

spyder those lyrics were epic man, the jesus moses line is needs some honorable mention that was dope..well done man i like the way you strung together multis and drug out rhyme schemes to complete your thoughts...almost perfect verse man the only thing i would improve would be your idea's...what i mean is it seemed like you rushed some of your concepts just to finish the line, but it had potential to be much better for instance where you had the "last words of a dying jason line" i think you coulda played with that a lil more....other then that fuckin perfect man


god damn awesome collab man this shit was raw

Thanks a lot man. I can't promise the Audio now, maybe later.

I've to admit some of the lines had to phrased awkwardly because I had to maintain the proper Multi, I'll work on that though.I'm using the UK accent for this one and I can flow through this easily, guess you didn't know about this(No big deal, no one knew that Ha Ha).

[Spyder]

thanks for the feed all

and En that line was Sams

[Man1x]

Yo, both of you killed this. Sam, some of your punchlines left my jaw dropped and the vocabulary was so complex I had to look up some words, that undivided attention/eye line was very clever too. Also, Spyder you had some very clever lines, some were extremely deep and, sorry Sam, but you did better on the punchline side. You also had a better story to your words too. The only criticism I could give would be that at times the vocabulary was too complex for an average listener to rap, this obviously isn't a single type track so I wouldn't see you having to worry about this. Good on everything guys, Sam, you should write more.

[J.R.]

Feed added to my original post.

[Sam.]

Thanks y'll.
Our hard work payed off, I think.

[Spyder]

thanks to everyone for keeping their word on feeding it

[Sam.]

thanks to everyone for keeping their word on feeding it

4 Pages.

Midnght Eyez is gonna feed this soon so one more is expected.

[Spyder]

i asked Geno for feed aswell.

ps Sam y u quittin

[Sam.]

i asked Geno for feed aswell.

ps Sam y u quittin

I'm not quitting writing, just not gonna share anything here.In fact I'm writing something right now.There's no genuine feeling to feed in people anymore, after all that I've done.

[Mr.DGAF]

I'm not quitting writing, just not gonna share anything here.In fact I'm writing something right now.There's no genuine feeling to feed in people anymore, after all that I've done.

That sucks man. If you ever do want feed though, PM me some stuff. I'd be more than happy to feed it bruh, no problem.