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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 18:46

Artists: T12
Song Title: ???



(Verse 1 : V-Dog)
-Im DROPPIN-HITS-TO-WIN-THIS-SHIT cuz i could "Air my keys" like i "MAKE-THIS-TYPE-IN-THE-WIND", your the "OPPOSITE-OF-A-KILLER",last I heard, you "ATE-DICK"-LIKE-ITS-A-"SIN"
-Me I BREAK-YA-FUNCTION cuz u "suck the boards" when I WRECK-WIT-FULL-"BLOWZ-DROPPIN-KEYS", If RANK-IS-NUTTIN please tell me why you're only in TEKNICAL-FLOWZ-PRODIGY
-Kid your GIGS-ARE-GAY, I "drop like prison heads flowin" as I "DIVE-IN-CELL-WAVES",you betta DIG-YA-GRAVE cuz like "2pac" said, you can "live" now, but after this duel you'll "DIE-IN-L.A."
-Imma SERVE-THIS-HOT cuz like "poopin on half court" my "SHIT-KEEPS-BOARDS-IN-CENTER",Your "VERSES-DROP like virgin sex wit bent dicks", only accidental "SHIFTS-BEFORE-YOU-ENTER" /
-im "MOLDIN-THIS-SHIT with punches" like "swinging FISTS-IN-PLAYDOH", im SCOLDIN-THIS-BITCH cuz syndicat's "no pro-teen"(protein) only has "flows concealed in tabs" like "TWISTED-FAYGO"
-****'s I HOIST-CREWS-I-BLAST cuz this kidz like "stupid gangstas" hes only "PROUD-TO-CRIP-WALK" my skripts knock ya "VOICE-THROUGH-YA-ASS" cuz u only know HOW-TO-"SHIT-TALK"
-my punches RIP-HOLES-THROUGH the screen with a keyboard placin a "X through ya name" and a "CROSS-IN-YA-SOUL", Im sorry sindicate but after i DISPOSE-YOU it'll be your 8th LOSS-IN-A-ROW
-Yo "mobil lips are fractured" im "MOVIN-MOUTHS-OVER" cuz this boys "weights' recycled"cuz he SPITS-"POUNDS-OF-JUNK", you winnin this is like "POOPIN-OUT-CLOVERS", ya "SHIT-OUTTA-LUCK"


(chorus)
could be sumin around
the new, the best we do confess
truly blessed
few can test
blew your bulletproof vest
right thru your chest




(Verse 2 : HAYZI)
...ring the bell, let off the claxon
ting-a-ling-a-ling here i come ready for action
wanna go eye to eye, toe to toe
and high for high, low for low blow for blow,
im hittin you quick like a jet of lit propane
comin... straight for your brain like its cocaine
*****'s flappin their gums i attack 'em for fun
cos theyre thinkin theyre clever theyre as wack as they come
its my time to take my crown
i rock at the top and continue to break more ground
its intangible how i vandangle your brain
manhandle you simple and plain like van dam would do
we bringin the tracks to chill your spine
verbal attacks in time to heal your mind
i make mcs retract and backtrack to robbin
clear the vicinity lyrically like a carpet bombin

what you reckon?


(chorus)
could be sumin around
the new, the best we do confess
truly blessed
few can test
blew your bulletproof vest
right thru your chest






(Verse 3 : Faith99)



(Chorus)
could be sumin around
the new, the best we do confess
truly blessed
few can test
blew your bulletproof vest right thru your chest
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 18:48

big spittaz?? nah, it dont have nuttin to do wit da song, what is the song about?
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 4th, '05, 18:49

i dunno, you go.
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 18:52

how but 'T12 Is Coming'?, and we can sumhow mix that in with the chorus, what do u think?
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 4th, '05, 18:54

this is the arrival
archetypal rap disciple
now you better start prayin and take out your bible
survival of the fittest and t12 the biggest
cos we cover the earth just admit it your finished
etc or sum shit
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 4th, '05, 19:30

t12 we're the new, the best
and youll be left on the shelf when we slew the rest
cos few can test, and we blow like war shells
cos we truly blessed blew your bulletproof vest right thru your chest

gimme sum feedback man
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 19:34

it was good, but i like the 1 b4 dat 1
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 4th, '05, 19:39

t12 we leavin gimicks behind
and we still be rippin this shit as youll be cumin to find
we gonna hit it the minute they cum thru
and we bring it to the limit you wouldnt but sum do

ideas aint flowin im havin sum trouble on the hook
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 4th, '05, 19:41

well shall we keep the arrival one or not or try a new one?
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 19:41

HAYZI wrote:this is the arrival
archetypal rap disciple
now you better start prayin and take out your bible
survival of the fittest and t12 the biggest
cos we cover the earth just admit it your finished
etc or sum shit


we should stick with that ^^^^^^^^^
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 19:43

why did u change ur AVATAR?
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Verse/ Faith

Postby Vettori » Sep 4th, '05, 19:45

I suck up emotions, hatred pain liek a fuckin magnet,
I have relied on my instincts, to long to repel from my life thats unset
That's unbread, and held in less oxygen then you need to be dead
Set up point and forward "yea whatever he said"
Whatever I said, fuck that plagerism shit, Be Your own saint
Don't give up your ideas, way to faint, Just take the time to repaint,
This image that represents you, and your true colours, Yea tha's what id do,
Try to reset yourself,Try to be what your not,Try everything give it all that you got,
Nothings gonna change by the snap of your fingers, Maybe the snap of my finger
Go figure, But i'm bigger, and i am proud, that i live my life, half it anyways in a cloud,
Tryin to find out who is or is not, on my side in this world, is it all just set up,
My mind mangled and twirled, Being beaten and stabbed, "Oh my god what a thrill"
It's not a thrill to me, it just sends all these chills down my back, Wow get the fuck off that,
Crack get high whats worth To be stabbed, It's worse then your one of a kind asshole of a dad,
Who wants to make your life a living hell and is glad,
Well ill be glad But lemme state that i'm not mad,
I've just Had,
The fuckin ultimate end of this bullshit, it's sad,

You be the judge if it should go in 5this aight, I'm actually not feelin it today, but check it

"Faith"
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 4th, '05, 19:45

youwant a betta one gimme a couple o mins watch dis
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 19:49

dat shit was hot homie, check my newer rap in CREATIVE WRITING
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 19:51

Artists: T12
Song Title: The Arrival



(Verse 1 : V-Dog)
-Im DROPPIN-HITS-TO-WIN-THIS-SHIT cuz i could "Air my keys" like i "MAKE-THIS-TYPE-IN-THE-WIND", your the "OPPOSITE-OF-A-KILLER",last I heard, you "ATE-DICK"-LIKE-ITS-A-"SIN"
-Me I BREAK-YA-FUNCTION cuz u "suck the boards" when I WRECK-WIT-FULL-"BLOWZ-DROPPIN-KEYS", If RANK-IS-NUTTIN please tell me why you're only in TEKNICAL-FLOWZ-PRODIGY
-Kid your GIGS-ARE-GAY, I "drop like prison heads flowin" as I "DIVE-IN-CELL-WAVES",you betta DIG-YA-GRAVE cuz like "2pac" said, you can "live" now, but after this duel you'll "DIE-IN-L.A."
-Imma SERVE-THIS-HOT cuz like "poopin on half court" my "SHIT-KEEPS-BOARDS-IN-CENTER",Your "VERSES-DROP like virgin sex wit bent dicks", only accidental "SHIFTS-BEFORE-YOU-ENTER" /
-im "MOLDIN-THIS-SHIT with punches" like "swinging FISTS-IN-PLAYDOH", im SCOLDIN-THIS-BITCH cuz syndicat's "no pro-teen"(protein) only has "flows concealed in tabs" like "TWISTED-FAYGO"
-****'s I HOIST-CREWS-I-BLAST cuz this kidz like "stupid gangstas" hes only "PROUD-TO-CRIP-WALK" my skripts knock ya "VOICE-THROUGH-YA-ASS" cuz u only know HOW-TO-"SHIT-TALK"
-my punches RIP-HOLES-THROUGH the screen with a keyboard placin a "X through ya name" and a "CROSS-IN-YA-SOUL", Im sorry sindicate but after i DISPOSE-YOU it'll be your 8th LOSS-IN-A-ROW
-Yo "mobil lips are fractured" im "MOVIN-MOUTHS-OVER" cuz this boys "weights' recycled"cuz he SPITS-"POUNDS-OF-JUNK", you winnin this is like "POOPIN-OUT-CLOVERS", ya "SHIT-OUTTA-LUCK"


(chorus)
this is the arrival
archetypal rap disciple
now you better start prayin and take out your bible
survival of the fittest and t12 the biggest
cos we cover the earth just admit it your finished






(Verse 2 : HAYZI)
...ring the bell, let off the claxon
ting-a-ling-a-ling here i come ready for action
wanna go eye to eye, toe to toe
and high for high, low for low blow for blow,
im hittin you quick like a jet of lit propane
comin... straight for your brain like its cocaine
*****'s flappin their gums i attack 'em for fun
cos theyre thinkin theyre clever theyre as wack as they come
its my time to take my crown
i rock at the top and continue to break more ground
its intangible how i vandangle your brain
manhandle you simple and plain like van dam would do
we bringin the tracks to chill your spine
verbal attacks in time to heal your mind
i make mcs retract and backtrack to robbin
clear the vicinity lyrically like a carpet bombin

what you reckon?


(chorus)
this is the arrival
archetypal rap disciple
now you better start prayin and take out your bible
survival of the fittest and t12 the biggest
cos we cover the earth just admit it your finished








(Verse 3 : Faith99)

I suck up emotions, hatred pain liek a fuckin magnet,
I have relied on my instincts, to long to repel from my life thats unset
That's unbread, and held in less oxygen then you need to be dead
Set up point and forward "yea whatever he said"
Whatever I said, fuck that plagerism shit, Be Your own saint
Don't give up your ideas, way to faint, Just take the time to repaint,
This image that represents you, and your true colours, Yea tha's what id do,
Try to reset yourself,Try to be what your not,Try everything give it all that you got,
Nothings gonna change by the snap of your fingers, Maybe the snap of my finger
Go figure, But i'm bigger, and i am proud, that i live my life, half it anyways in a cloud,
Tryin to find out who is or is not, on my side in this world, is it all just set up,
My mind mangled and twirled, Being beaten and stabbed, "Oh my god what a thrill"
It's not a thrill to me, it just sends all these chills down my back, Wow get the fuck off that,
Crack get high whats worth To be stabbed, It's worse then your one of a kind asshole of a dad,
Who wants to make your life a living hell and is glad,
Well ill be glad But lemme state that i'm not mad,
I've just Had,
The fuckin ultimate end of this bullshit, it's sad,




(Chorus)
this is the arrival
archetypal rap disciple
now you better start prayin and take out your bible
survival of the fittest and t12 the biggest
cos we cover the earth just admit it your finished



dis shit is fireeee
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