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Postby Jdogg06 » Dec 5th, '06, 18:52

hey u dumb slut check out the rap battle section and i have wrote songs in this section
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 5th, '06, 18:56

Im sure u did, imma check and tell u how great u are in a few minutes. Stay mad.
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 5th, '06, 19:05

Im not impressed. Those are not even songs, they are a bunch of punchlines with no metro, tempo, flow, nothing.
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Postby Kojack » Dec 5th, '06, 19:57

it's sumthin' between Eminem and Young buck

i mean the flow

but i don't like the lyrics
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 5th, '06, 20:29

Kojack wrote:it's sumthin' between Eminem and Young buck

i mean the flow

but i don't like the lyrics


The fuck is u talking about?
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Postby Kojack » Dec 5th, '06, 20:38

talkin' about his rhymes dude
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Postby Rae » Dec 5th, '06, 22:34

ehhh Kez i liked it ...

keep it up ... ur really good for a 14 yr. old! :D

dont worry about what certain "bitches" say ... ;)
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Postby Jay-19 » Dec 6th, '06, 16:12

Who the fuck is this Jdogg anywayz?
Is he always complaining and bitching around with everyone to look "cool" or something like that? :confusion:

I liked it Kez, you sure as hell can write rhymes.
But I really think you should build up the lines in another way if you know what i'm saying..?

Like sometimes, it seems a little backwards or sumtin.. Like the words are in the wrong place.

But overall, it's really good! :happy:
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Postby Jdogg06 » Dec 6th, '06, 19:38

bitch im the coolest in this whole site
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 6th, '06, 20:00

Jdogg06 wrote:bitch im the coolest in this whole site


Really....do u see anyone actually care about you?
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Postby TRshady » Dec 6th, '06, 21:43

Jdogg06 wrote:bitch im the coolest in this whole site


The coolest and the most recently banned.

A note for others: Patience is wearing thin, no matter how long you have been here, how popular you are or how you've previously been ... continuous offensive posting and complete disregard for rules will have you removed.
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 6th, '06, 21:44

TRshady wrote:
Jdogg06 wrote:bitch im the coolest in this whole site


The coolest and the most recently banned.

A note for others: Patience is wearing thin, no matter how long you have been here, how popular you are or how you've previously been ... continuous offensive posting and complete disregard for rules will have you removed.


Haha....do u mind also getting rid of k block?
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Postby TRshady » Dec 6th, '06, 21:46

Message me if you have any forum member issues.
Point out who it is, give me a link and I'll do my job.
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 6th, '06, 21:49

We should call u the Terminator.
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Postby Kez » Dec 6th, '06, 22:53

Thank God you got rid of that guy :worship: :worship:
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