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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Solace » Jul 12th, '08, 01:11

Kosovic wrote:Sounds nice that i am still alive. Grrrr.

:o OiOi
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Kosovic » Jul 12th, '08, 01:35

:o

oioi
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Solace » Jul 12th, '08, 22:47

:o oioi


anyone else got some feedback for me? if not... :o oioi
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Kosovic » Jul 12th, '08, 23:29

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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Solace » Jul 13th, '08, 02:56

Kosovic wrote::o

oioi

:o oioi


I added more lines, :o oioi, 34 lines.
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Solace » Jul 13th, '08, 10:23

I added a lot more lines, and really theres a twist to it at the end :o oioi
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Re: Untitled Diss

Postby Greeeeeeg69 » Jul 15th, '08, 01:19

it was good
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Re: Untitled Diss

Postby Solace » Jul 15th, '08, 01:22

Greeeeeeg69 wrote:it was good

Thanks man :happy:

About the "twist" at the end, i took that out. I wanted it to be completely a diss.

Anyone got a name idea for this?
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Re: Untitled Diss

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 15th, '08, 05:33

I feel like the creative writing is becoming the rap battle section each day
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Re: Untitled Diss

Postby Solace » Jul 15th, '08, 08:11

The Toy Soldier wrote:I feel like the creative writing is becoming the rap battle section each day

im only writing this cause i have nothing better to write, but after this is completely done ill write some personal shit :y:
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Re: Untitled Diss

Postby Solace » Jul 16th, '08, 22:29

Anyone else :unsure:

Added couple of lines.
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Re: Untitled Diss

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 19th, '08, 02:11

shadymademe wrote:Anyone else :unsure:

Added couple of lines.

A name? You mad Cuz i'm styling on you.

nah I'm messing

"I say Fuck to the ones who front"
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Re: Untitled Diss

Postby Solace » Jul 19th, '08, 02:47

The Toy Soldier wrote:
shadymademe wrote:Anyone else :unsure:

Added couple of lines.

A name? You mad Cuz i'm styling on you.

nah I'm messing

"I say Fuck to the ones who front"


"Fuck The Ones Who Front" as a name?

edit: i like "Fight Me" tho
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Re: Untitled Diss

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 19th, '08, 03:37

shadymademe wrote:
The Toy Soldier wrote:
shadymademe wrote:Anyone else :unsure:

Added couple of lines.

A name? You mad Cuz i'm styling on you.

nah I'm messing

"I say Fuck to the ones who front"


"Fuck The Ones Who Front" as a name?

edit: i like "Fight Me" tho

well its what you want but the title i said kinda rhymes so idk but nice freestyle either way you goin to record it?
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Re: Fight Me

Postby Solace » Jul 19th, '08, 10:09

No its not gunna be recorded. i aint got a mic :P
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