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Postby LDPR » Mar 15th, '06, 22:40

MY first frestyle on this forum ...

the new boy makin his first moves in this site
im still in training but dont get confused alright
u were all once beginners i wanna set this shit right
so dont dissrespect me u better act polite
i might b de new dude arround here here but i definitely like to fight
Im the L to the D ... fuck this shit im LD_PR
mess arround with me u goin straight to the ER
after i split u head open with this Bar
not even George Clooney is gonna help u
yall forget bout it i can just keep on goin till my fingertips go blue
but i gotta go got some other stuff to do
and here are the battle topics right
so dont be shy and just take ur time to hit me back ..

peace ya'll ... and holla back \\// ldpr
..Jesus Christ, if your that much of a gangster, put the mic down
You should be out killin motherfuckers right now
Kill a motherfucker dead, kill'em dead bitch ......Shady4life
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Postby Mc Cubz » Mar 16th, '06, 00:02

well dun bro. u may be new but uve obviously got some skills. I like da multi-rhymes in da first few lines.
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Postby LDPR » Mar 16th, '06, 15:55

well dun bro. u may be new but uve obviously got some skills. I like da multi-rhymes in da first few lines.


yo thnxx for the comment Mc Cubz .. Ive also read some of ur stuff ..u damn good too :D :8)
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