Diss To 3 Of My Friends From School(From My Spanish Class)

by **ThomasAguanis** » Mar 24th, '06, 04:17

ok so I have 3 friends who try to rap(posted a aim battle with one of them up on tr and they're the best out of the 3) and in Spanish class they always try to freestyle(they say "spit a free")(also they always call people "B" and say whizz and cheeks..like "you're rhymes are cheeks " or "your whizz")and yesterday they asked me to join in and "roast"/ "sting" one of them but I

by 4D » Mar 24th, '06, 11:33

Very good verse, you`re great with the flow and dropping some bad-ass multies now man, PROPS!!

The little chorus thingy at the end kinda of let it down, that whole hurse thing is very cliche, but, other than that, can`t find a faul, Brilliantt!!

by **ThomasAguanis** » Mar 24th, '06, 21:49

FORDIE wrote:Very good verse, you`re great with the flow and dropping some bad-ass multies now man, PROPS!!

The little chorus thingy at the end kinda of let it down, that whole hurse thing is very cliche, but, other than that, can`t find a faul, Brilliantt!!

thanks man :worship:

amd i agree the chorus thing did let it down. i probally just remove that. i had room left at the bottom of the page i wrote on but not enough for another 16 so i wrote that.

by **ThomasAguanis** » Mar 24th, '06, 21:59

g_killa wrote:i did reply in the zombie but as i replyed it changed skin and logged me out

i now cant log on

nehow dope verse did u show it to them? if so what did they say

i didnt show them but tolds them to hype it haha. chris came to me in the halls and said he heard i wrote some crazy rap dissing him and i told him i did but someone came up to us and said rap battle? and chris walked away haha.

but i'll probally show them wednesday since its a free period in spanish and we just sit around and do nothing. and i did freestyle a little with mike in math class and it was prety good. hmm i said something like this:

you're not a 5th of this/
i'm sick with this/
you should call me siphloious/

and another:

i may be a STD/
but when the best see me they decree/
that they cant mess with me/

sort of garbage but people listening liked mine better than his.

by **Shadyluva** » Mar 24th, '06, 23:21

this was hot...it had good flow and good lyrics

keep it up :happy:

by **MuNxMuN** » Mar 24th, '06, 23:31

i think i'm kinda late to put a response but i was too lazy to read it yesterday cause i was tired and it was too long for me to read :sweating:

anyways i like it a lot it's nicely written i'm kinda like you cause my friend's trying to get me to freestyle too :tounge2:

he freestyles and then keeps telling me to continue it when i don't wanna cause i suck at it lmao

you should show it to your friends and tell us what their reaction was :flower:

by **ThomasAguanis** » Mar 24th, '06, 23:39

MuNxMuN wrote:i think i'm kinda late to put a response but i was too lazy to read it yesterday cause i was tired and it was too long for me to read

anyways i like it a lot it's nicely written i'm kinda like you cause my friend's trying to get me to freestyle too he freestyles and then keeps telling me to continue it when i don't wanna cause i suck at it lmao you should show it to your friends and tell us what their reaction was

you're not late in a responce. thanks for taking the time to read it :flower:

i'll show them next week and will post their reaction the day i show them

by **ThomasAguanis** » Mar 25th, '06, 00:01

memyselforwho wrote:lol, yeah that would be funny...your friends reaction that is....

if you want i wrote a 2 page lesson on the art of freestyling
and a 4 page lesson on how to write a succesful rap song

umm you should post them in rap battles

Diss To 3 Of My Friends From School(From My Spanish Class)

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