partially what i freestyled earlier then i added shit

[Ka0t1c]

I'm just trying to be a shining star
but right now I'm sitting inside my car
thinking why is my life this hard
it's time to take charge
cuz what hides in my heart
i can't deny to myself
so until i go silent thru the dark
i'll try to do all
i can before i fall
cuz no one else will help me out my hell
or i'll die in my four walls
without at least working on
keepin peace while
the wild ones go to war
because not anymore i adore
i wanna explore many things
from the new styles ashore
and i like islands and stores
but right now i'm feelin poor
i need to smile some more
well if you walked a mile, you'd know
it's hard to ignore
that i'm growin bored
of this world, of our court
i wish i were a good sport
but the truth is i threw that to the ocean floor
just for openin my vocal cords to the hords
also to the forum boards....


feed link; http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=103376