~ love poem ~

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » Mar 27th, '06, 03:06

what is love?...

love is a mystery waiting to be solved
a primal instinct emotionaly evolved

ever changing and never satisfied
it is the hope that keeps us alive

unconditional love is to be back in Eden
worries replaced by new found freedom

it is an unatainable dream
a quenching sip of lifes cool stream

love is many different things.....

an intimate embrace
Gods good grace

a suiters kiss
eternal bliss

to have it all and still want more
it is our curse and never ending chore

no matter what it never brakes
always gives but never takes

love is releiving breath of exticy
having u here next to me

it is in the eye of the beholder
blosoming sweetly as the two of us grow older

by **ThomasAguanis** » Mar 27th, '06, 04:51

i agree with everyone so far.
great poem.
keep it up.

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » Mar 29th, '06, 07:57

wow...only 3 comments? wtf?....... dosnt nebody like my purdy poem?...... i thought it was good...... but no one likes it...... bossman didnt even comment :'(

and hes my baby and hes supposed to be supportive..... and.... and..... :'(

this is just so hurtful!!!

by 4D » Mar 29th, '06, 11:16

Who the fuck or WTF is Bossman? :confusion:

Sorry for the delayed response, was a great poem, you`ve got a good grasp of multies too!! Keep it up!!

by **Tomega** » Mar 29th, '06, 19:02

where did you find it?

just kiddin' it's a compliment, coz its real good

by **Christina** » Mar 29th, '06, 19:05

hey that's hot girl!! :worship:

Crisi is supporting yaaaaaa

:D

by **Rae** » Mar 29th, '06, 19:31

that was a AWESOME poem! dont let anyone tell you any different! OK? keep it up ...

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » Mar 30th, '06, 00:13

memyselfamadouche- go fuck urself

1. i didnt ask for comments on my signiture, i asked for them on my poem
2. its my own original work
3. and leave "bossman" outta it becus u dont know who the fuck he is, u dont understand it......... and now ur makin it sound like im a fuckin stalker!......... its becus of people like u that i...... o, nm........ but u shut up and keep him outta it!

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » Mar 30th, '06, 01:39

dont deserv wat?......... to live?...... dont deserv love?....... wat?..... wat do i not deserv?

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » Mar 30th, '06, 02:01

memyselforwho wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:dont deserv wat?......... to live?...... dont deserv love?....... wat?..... wat do i not deserv?

NO comment, OR.....never mind

no.... im serius..... wat do i not deserv...... becus given the fact that uve never met me.... and u dont know me or nething about me...... i wanna know....... wat do i not deserv????????.......

o, and to answer ur question....... bossman (its just a nickname) is a member of the forum.... Kurimoto........ and i know hes not a 65 year old dude..... theres such a thing as a webcam...... and i appologize for getting upset..... but its offensive wen people judge sumthin that they dont know..... and a lot of people dont understand it...... and i dont appreciate u judging sumthin that u dont understand and sumthin in wich u dont know wats goin on........

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » Mar 30th, '06, 02:06

Angie wrote::unsure: chill ppl.... goshness.... nice one anna banna

thank u angi :flower:

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » Mar 30th, '06, 02:11

memyselforwho wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
memyselforwho wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:dont deserv wat?......... to live?...... dont deserv love?....... wat?..... wat do i not deserv?

NO comment, OR.....never mind

no.... im serius..... wat do i not deserv...... becus given the fact that uve never met me.... and u dont know me or nething about me...... i wanna know....... wat do i not deserv????????.......

o, and to answer ur question....... bossman (its just a nickname) is a member of the forum.... Kurimoto........ and i know hes not a 65 year old dude..... theres such a thing as a webcam...... and i appologize for getting upset..... but its offensive wen people judge sumthin that they dont know..... and a lot of people dont understand it...... and i dont appreciate u judging sumthin that u dont understand and sumthin in wich u dont know wats goin on........

i didnt mean anything in a bad way lol

i dont get it.... how is saying i ruin society and have a menacing obsession with sumone ive never met...... and calling me a retard...... how do u not mean nething bad by that? :confusion:

by **Kurimoto** » Mar 30th, '06, 05:59

memyselforwho wrote:lol, you know what you are....a retard, if you can love a guy you met on the computer, and do all this shit, despite the fact that he could be a 65 year old phyco, and he dont even post or place any comments whatsoever on your threads, im sorry but you ruin society, and unfortunatly dont deserve

you know what, your a ignorant person. for one i assure you im not 65, im actually 17 and a high school debater, want proof, i qualified to natinials this year...look up the details if u wana...
i didnt comment cuz i dont visit the writing part much, but i am not, and in regards to the poem i liked it

and you leave my babe alone...

for the record im the bossman...

by **ines** » Mar 31st, '06, 13:25

nice to read it

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