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[autotooner]

Just a couple bars that came to mind, haven't wrote much in a long time, just a little practice...



These kids been droppin nonsense, constantly
its time for me to stop their talking, wannabes
little tykes, I told ya a million times, quit riddlin lies
ur just killin time, fillin minds with little rhymes

sorry, forgot about the feedback thing...

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[autotooner]

here's a few more that I wrote at the same time...


we're instillin fear in these lil queers
who be fillin ears with villian jeers
ur murkin yourself, killin mirrors
I'm lurkin in depths, chillin near


dr lector has come to consume ur face
no room for chase, u lose, too late
its true, just haste, no moves u'll make
when u lose ur pace, crash, boom, its fate
ur screwed, as the ER removes your waist

[Edge]

not bad, just extremely short, add some nice multis, and some sounded forced... i liked it tho, just next time wait until you have more than 4 lines and get a nice little verse going

[autotooner]

thanks bro. My nephew & I were freestylin back & forth by text messaging, these were just a few of mine.

I've got some longer verses, I'll get a few of them typed & post them.

Thanks for the feedback.

[Edge]

thanks bro. My nephew & I were freestylin back & forth by text messaging, these were just a few of mine.

I've got some longer verses, I'll get a few of them typed & post them.

Thanks for the feedback.

Aright good shit