The Birth of Hip Hop

[Wreck]

I sleep with the mic in hand
I can think up a 16 so fast I already typed it, damn
you want flash? here's light in a pan
this game's as good as the fight in a man
I exercised my mind, my brain's on weight fitness
I'm as rich as Microsoft, my Word can pay-dividends
this song is explicit, shit, you better come listen in
you're about to experience the birth of hip hop, and next comes the Christening
My mind goes through all stages, my pen goes to great lengths
I love you hip hop, the least you could do is say-thanks

[autotooner]

nice work. I like the Microsoft line, very nice.

[Ka0t1c]

i didn't like the microsoft line, it seemed outta sync with how ur style is. i think it's better without it. this song is simple but can be a fun song to rap and listen to

[Wreck]

Thank you both for the feed, I appreciate it. I will take your advice Ka0tic, thanks.

[Sam.]

Good verse seems more of a freestyle .

Link of feed bruh !

[Spyder]

pretty basic but i can tell you wanna improve. just keep with it and youll get there
it flowed nice and everything so just write a rhyme a day and itll help

[Mr. Chambers]

closed no link of feedback