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Just Venting

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Just Venting

Postby ArsheyHaq » Feb 28th, '11, 01:21

Thought I'd share a verse that helped me get through a day..

I need someone trusting for support/
so I talk to God but there's not much of a rapport/
every time I do it's like I'm just bein' ignored/
but like a customer I wanna know what's He have in store/..for me
cuz I'm at a present age in the adolescent stage/
where if one thing goes wrong I'm in a sad, depressive state/
and I don't wanna give off bad impressions, so I keep my mad, aggressive rage/..caged
but I just got news my mom and dad have separated/
which leads to me not getting that impressive grades/
plus I got a girl who's a tad obsessive and says I'm bad at guessing games/
just another problem I'll add to my resume/
to have in hand, while beggin' to be let in, as I'm standin' at heaven's gates/
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Re: Just Venting

Postby ArsheyHaq » Mar 1st, '11, 01:51

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Re: Just Venting

Postby ArsheyHaq » Mar 4th, '11, 00:03

LOL correct on the heavy Em influence, but I'm also diggin' Drake right now too and I think that's where I'm getting the whole "in store/..for me" thing going on (Drake does it a lot, and it sounds pretty dope)

I've never actually written a whole song, only random verses, cuz I never have enough thought on one subject to make a full rap hehe but thanks for the feed, I really appreciated it especially since it's my first on this board
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