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Here, just something I did real quick, thinking about a girl I really like that am good friends with.....
Me and her fit together but we miss and match
People running their mouths, talking this-and-that
When I write, I write to her, even if it looks like chicken-scratch
I made some new love beats for you too ma, pick a batch
I'm never sick of rap, too bad when I'm at work I'm kicking-ass
Every other couple breaks up, but girl we can-last
The 2 of us, we're like George & Weezy
and you should listen when I say, you're gorgeous, believe me
we the best like Jordan, easily, so here's to an even gorgeous evening
I love you but sometimes relationships bite, like they're going-through-teething
With you I feel safer & chill, let's hit "Miami" like we're Jada & Will
We're like a music band, but we also still got haters-still
But this marriage I made it real, & I put that ring on like I put on Jers
Damn ma I bought you some new clothes, but you still got my same hood on, word
And you best believe we gonna light it up like it's Dynamite
like Taio Cruz, wake up to a gorgeous day, and damn you looking fine-tonight