The World Burns To Ashes

[Xray]

Blaze the surface, the pearl's turn to blackness
Raise the furnace, the world burns to ashes
Humanity is like living in a capsule
You step in my space, and I'm ripping in to hack you
The mainframe is soil, to maintain oil
These brain games toil, your same name's loyal
But they will seperate you, if your skill is novice
Cat's done catch a purpose, Sajjad's at your service
It's light-years ago, rights are just told
Couple decades flow, it's fights over gold
A million die, civilians tire, they taking over
Men who living a lie, can plant a fire in the polar
And your sober, they soak ya, you're floating in a raft
Pick you in a draft, and your their soldiers at dispatch
You fail to notice you're just dieing in the Nile
While their smile amplifier till you're forced to open fire

Never mind the title, it's only to attract attention, lulz.
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[DƎRDYPK]

pretty dope verse Heist
real interested in hearing this over one of your beats

[Yah-hah]

Was dope man I really liked the maintain soil lines enjoyed those. I wanna hear this shit

[Maybe]

Now this is what I'm talking about... Classic flow, excellent structure (that is smoother than a babys ass) and some badass content. No complaints here, and I bet it would sound better recorded.

[Block]

Again, I'm impressed that you're branching out of your comfort zone. You're impressing me alot lately, bro. We need to get on that track we've been planning forever now, haha.

[Ka0t1c]

the best written parts are the first lines, still a very well thought out piece, good structure, understandable, and never lost my interest!