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Feedback I be givin'
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EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
k block wrote:Ahh, this is getting slept on. Again, dope shit bro. Simple but not simple. A paradox. Hmm...
Everything fits amazingly well for how fast you wrote it. I can't wait to record this collab. My nuts are tingling at the thought of the beautiful music we are going to make. Orgasms over instrumentals. <<< NEW EP NAME ???? lol
EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
This is for the dudes smoking weed in the backseat,
driving middle-class cars, working at a factory...
Let's hear it for the broker peeps...
the ones that gotta rent a home and can't afford their groceries,
the ones that think they're haunted by the ghost of their past,
until they find that it's a torn sheet, with holes in the back,
I'm talking bout' the people with a troubling existence...
the ones you only see because they stumble in the distance...
Xray wrote:Damn bro, that was truly art. Not many people rap about this kind of stuff anymore, and it's what made hip hop so good. Just relating to shit. I can relate to this 100%. That was easily the realest verse I've read on here. Your rhymes were impossible to make any smoother. It was perfectly said.
These lines are my fav cause their basically my life lol.This is for the dudes smoking weed in the backseat,
driving middle-class cars, working at a factory...
Let's hear it for the broker peeps...
the ones that gotta rent a home and can't afford their groceries,
the ones that think they're haunted by the ghost of their past,
until they find that it's a torn sheet, with holes in the back,
I'm talking bout' the people with a troubling existence...
the ones you only see because they stumble in the distance...
Would love to hear this recorded, excellent work bro. 10/10.
EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
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