McMaybe - Life's A Gift (Full song!)

[Maybe]

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[Maybe]

Man... I got a mic in my hand...
but still, I'm gettin' slept on like a flight to Japan... (damn!)

[mcZu]

No complaints. Enjoyed reading it, really good work, man. Especially your second verse and the chorus.

[Maybe]

No complaints. Enjoyed reading it, really good work, man. Especially your second verse and the chorus.

Thanks man, I appreciate the comment.

Bump!

[MikeNUFC]

This was great. Second verse was amazing. Your use of asides always adds so much to the piece. And your wordplay doesn't effect in any negative way, just adds to the imagery. I usually find wordplay takes something away but it only adds here.

[Xray]

That was amazing. One of the best pieces I've read, recently. It was truly beautiful, how smooth and serious the lyrics are, and the way you ended it was just mind blowing. There is not one bit of exaggeration in my feed back, this is exactly what I think of the song. If there were awards for the best written song here, I'd vote for this one, it's that good. Man, I can't stress enough how much you've grown as an artist and how serious your work has become from your old stuff. CRAZY motherfucking song for real dude, whatever this tape or album this is for, I can't wait for it.

[Maybe]

That was amazing. One of the best pieces I've read, recently. It was truly beautiful, how smooth and serious the lyrics are, and the way you ended it was just mind blowing. There is not one bit of exaggeration in my feed back, this is exactly what I think of the song. If there were awards for the best written song here, I'd vote for this one, it's that good. Man, I can't stress enough how much you've grown as an artist and how serious your work has become from your old stuff. CRAZY motherfucking song for real dude, whatever this tape or album this is for, I can't wait for it.

Made my week man. I appreciate the kind words, and I'm glad you're liking the new style I've been trying to develop. Thanks a lot, and I'm sure you'll love the EP.


@ MikeNUFC: Thank you man, I really appreciate the kind words.

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This thread is filled with ninjas.


Sick shit bro. I already told you.

[RainMan44]

That was dope, especially the 2nd verse. Keep at it


Think you can feed my lonely verse?

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[Maybe]

That was dope, especially the 2nd verse. Keep at it


Think you can feed my lonely verse?

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Thanks man, done.

Thanks for the comments people ^^

[Maybe]

Bump!

[ArsheyHaq]

Well, I listened to you and checked out this rap too

I wasn't disappointed with the rhyming once again. I like how you hear/say the rhymes differently. I wouldn't do it myself, but it works for you since you do it so well and consistently

Most of this stuff though I'd only be able to comprehend if I had a dictionary out lol Anyways, Idk if you made this up yourself, but I liked it:

"Man... I got a mic in my hand...
but still, I'm gettin' slept on like a flight to Japan... (damn!)"

ahaha why don't you do a rap like that? All punchlines and shit..

[Maybe]

Well, I listened to you and checked out this rap too

I wasn't disappointed with the rhyming once again. I like how you hear/say the rhymes differently. I wouldn't do it myself, but it works for you since you do it so well and consistently

Most of this stuff though I'd only be able to comprehend if I had a dictionary out lol Anyways, Idk if you made this up yourself, but I liked it:

"Man... I got a mic in my hand...
but still, I'm gettin' slept on like a flight to Japan... (damn!)"

ahaha why don't you do a rap like that? All punchlines and shit..

Thanks for the kind words... Haha, anything you listen to is 3+ years old. I'll make sure to update my stuff soon. As for the punchline stuff.. I use to write like that (that's a line from a random verse I wrote). I'll post some of that stuff later