Just some bullshit I wrote in about 15 minutes. Don't even like it that much, but might as well post it.
'An emotion on the surface is a mere gust in the wind
and as the gust catches light we see nothing but sin'
"Oh Mike that's so abstract, it's like, really poetic
And I showed my friend Sandra, she totally gets it"
Get what? The lines I wrote were nonsense and blabber
But recite it to you fucks, it's met with constant damn chatter
Start off with 'emotion', add in a short metaphor
A reference to weather usually helps set the score
Rest assured that talk of 'roses' fills up some lines
Doesn't need to make sense - 'it closes till it stops time'
Drop in a similie with an attempt to personify colour
'The falling of red like we're hunting in summer'
Always end on a line that makes no sense at all
'The clock strikes the moon... it's so tense we fall'
As long as you follow these most simple rules
You'll be idolisied by pretentious, close-minded fools
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