I'm As Good As They Come

by **Maybe** » Mar 25th, '11, 01:22

Down for editing.

by **classthe_king** » Mar 25th, '11, 01:27

The begining was amazing but I thought it kind of fell off from there, like you were trying to rush to finish it.

by **Maybe** » Mar 25th, '11, 01:28

classthe_king wrote:The begining was amazing but I thought it kind of fell off from there, like you were trying to rush to finish it.

Haha yeah man, thanks for the comment. I did rush the ending, good eye. I was on a taxi and about to get off (to work) so I just wanted to finish it up.

by **classthe_king** » Mar 25th, '11, 01:29

What are you implying when you put a ... after every line? Just wondering.

by **Maybe** » Mar 25th, '11, 01:34

classthe_king wrote:What are you implying when you put a ... after every line? Just wondering.

A pause longer than a comma. I do it for myself so I know how long the pause is. Others can read it as they wish.

by **ArsheyHaq** » Mar 25th, '11, 03:51

I really don't get these types of verses, but seems to be the popular form of writing in forums today. BUT even when verses like these do go over my head lol I can't ignore the raw rhyming on here, and gotta give you props for it. I'm lovin' your multies, they're sick!

"some would say a psychopath, see-sawing a tragedy...
that stabs you with a pencil, just to redraw your anatomy,"

liked what you did there with the play on words, but what made it more impressive was the rhyming..damn

"I laugh at off... with a Demi-God complexion...
(getting off on every thought, with semi-hard erections)..."

ahaha another line where that applies..where do you come up with this stuff? Oh, that's right, on taxi rides lol

Good work, but what's up with the parenthesis around some lines?

by **_Steven_** » Mar 25th, '11, 04:07

I laugh at off... with a Demi-God complexion...
(getting off on every thought, with semi-hard erections)

by **Maybe** » Mar 25th, '11, 05:42

ArsheyHaq wrote:I really don't get these types of verses, but seems to be the popular form of writing in forums today. BUT even when verses like these do go over my head lol I can't ignore the raw rhyming on here, and gotta give you props for it. I'm lovin' your multies, they're sick!

"some would say a psychopath, see-sawing a tragedy...
that stabs you with a pencil, just to redraw your anatomy,"

liked what you did there with the play on words, but what made it more impressive was the rhyming..damn

"I laugh at off... with a Demi-God complexion...
(getting off on every thought, with semi-hard erections)..."

ahaha another line where that applies..where do you come up with this stuff? Oh, that's right, on taxi rides lol

Good work, but what's up with the parenthesis around some lines?

Thanks for the kind words man. Yeah, this style of writing is weird I'll admit, but you should check out some of my other more meaningful songs posted on this page (Life's A Gift, for example).

The parenthesis are to signify lines that are spoken in a different tone of voice (since I record these), and the ellipsis are to signify sections I pause after (in case that was a wondered topic).

Anyway, thanks again for checking it out.

by **Devil'sAdvocate** » Mar 25th, '11, 22:33

some would say a psychopath, see-sawing a tragedy...
that stabs you with a pencil, just to redraw your anatomy

thats a damn fuckin punch.

rhyming was off the chain too,enjoyed reading this

by **Unscarred** » Mar 27th, '11, 01:25

Fuck yeah Maybe's back

My favourite poster. :worship:

Where have you been?

by **Maybe** » Mar 27th, '11, 03:22

Unscarred wrote:Fuck yeah Maybe's back

My favourite poster. Where have you been?

Haha what's up bro? I was finishing school/working, now I'm back wasting my life away on here again like the old days. :y:

by **Unscarred** » Apr 3rd, '11, 15:21

Im glad to hear that, the forum wasnt the same without you :y:

by **Maybe** » Apr 3rd, '11, 20:05

Unscarred wrote:Im glad to hear that, the forum wasnt the same without you

I'm glad you're still around ^^

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