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Poetic Psychopath
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Poetic Psychopath
by Maybe » Mar 26th, '11, 05:49
classthe_king wrote:
If you and Siinide don't start recording soon I'm going to fly to where ever you live, tie you up, put the mic in front of your faces and force you to record.
Bronies: Kez, Yoshi, Slimm, Satire, Block, Xray, Dr3, Killa, VenomBlackViper, C.R.E.A.M, SWEET_TOOTH, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie & all the citizens of Ponyville.
EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
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Re: Poetic Psychopath
by VenomBlackViper » Mar 26th, '11, 08:40
This was dope man, my kinda shit 
only thing is clockwork & sock drawers gotta be stretched a bit to rhyme, but if you can pull it off then it's all good
only thing is clockwork & sock drawers gotta be stretched a bit to rhyme, but if you can pull it off then it's all good
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Re: Poetic Psychopath
by WakeUpShow » Mar 26th, '11, 20:04
i didnt get to read this, but I just want to make sure you got my piece I sent you for the Writing Competition bc you haven't responded.
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Re: Poetic Psychopath
by Maybe » Mar 26th, '11, 20:05
Thanks man, and the Clockwork orange line continues in to the line after it so it rhymes smoothly. Try reading it a bit faster and you'll see.
@Cosh: I did, I just haven't had time to respond to everyone.
Try reading it a bit faster and you'll see.@Cosh: I did, I just haven't had time to respond to everyone.
classthe_king wrote:
If you and Siinide don't start recording soon I'm going to fly to where ever you live, tie you up, put the mic in front of your faces and force you to record.
Bronies: Kez, Yoshi, Slimm, Satire, Block, Xray, Dr3, Killa, VenomBlackViper, C.R.E.A.M, SWEET_TOOTH, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie & all the citizens of Ponyville.
EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
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Re: Poetic Psychopath
by classthe_king » Mar 26th, '11, 21:28
smh @ the cw mod not even posting a link of feed
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Poetic Psychopath
by Maybe » Mar 26th, '11, 23:01
classthe_king wrote:smh @ the cw mod not even posting a link of feed
Lol. I thought I did, I'll edit it. Anyway, why don't you bastards feed my shit?
classthe_king wrote:
If you and Siinide don't start recording soon I'm going to fly to where ever you live, tie you up, put the mic in front of your faces and force you to record.
Bronies: Kez, Yoshi, Slimm, Satire, Block, Xray, Dr3, Killa, VenomBlackViper, C.R.E.A.M, SWEET_TOOTH, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie & all the citizens of Ponyville.
EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
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Re: Poetic Psychopath
by Maybe » Mar 27th, '11, 19:52
B-HUMP.
classthe_king wrote:
If you and Siinide don't start recording soon I'm going to fly to where ever you live, tie you up, put the mic in front of your faces and force you to record.
Bronies: Kez, Yoshi, Slimm, Satire, Block, Xray, Dr3, Killa, VenomBlackViper, C.R.E.A.M, SWEET_TOOTH, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie & all the citizens of Ponyville.
EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
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