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It Was All A Dream

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It Was All A Dream

Postby Trigger » Apr 17th, '06, 23:09

It was all a dream, smokin weed was a daily routine
duckin behind bushes in the shadow so we wont be seen.
Police always rushin us, hasillin us, given us a fukin fuss.
takin it day by day, strugglin makin it look like its all ok
puttin on a picture perfect play, im glad i went away.
ppl tryin to call me, not knowin i was off to the army
tryin to get away from my family, feel free a new destiny.
now im bak a new attitude a new out look on the world
puttin clothes on my bak feedin not only me but my babe girl
watchin the world swirl lookin at my babe girl eyes just pearl
i thank god for her every minute of everyday
if it wasnt for her id end up either dead or gay
i wouldnt have it ne otherway.
i look at everything in a new perspective
laughin at the past how i use to live.
as a matter of fact if ne of ya'll wanna hola
pm me and we'll see i charge a dollar
but im back with a new clearlier visoin
a new mission, to be kool wit everyone
for me its in the past long gone all done

Sup everyone :wave: ya its tru i got a babe girl shes 4 months Jasmene. I found out my girl was pregnet when i was in the army. when i got that call my whole world all of a sudden didnt revlolve around me. I just wanted to say to everyone on tr that after goin throu wat i went throu i do have a new perspective on things and wat went down in the past wasnt worth it hopin to hear from ya'll
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Postby Trigger » Apr 17th, '06, 23:19

g_killa wrote:2 questions

1. wen u join the army

2. wen u find out she was prgnant


i joined the army a year and a half ago
and i found out she was pregent 2 weeks after we had sex lol :happy:
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Postby MuNxMuN » Apr 17th, '06, 23:21

that's so sweet :'( i wish my dad would write me something like that :sweating:
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Postby Trigger » Apr 17th, '06, 23:24

g_killa wrote:so......why did u never mention the army till now...as for "sex" wen dis happen?

i never really thought the army thing really mattered, i figured no one would really care, and the sex it happened 16 months ago

oh and MuNxMuN im shur ur dead thinks it :D
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Re: It Was All A Dream

Postby Trigger » Apr 17th, '06, 23:32

g_killa wrote:
Trigger wrote: shes 4 months Jasmene.


16 months ago


now im no smart guy but im sure 16 - 4 = 12 and how the hell is she pregnant for 12 months......you gotta come back with better crap nxt time dude...oh btw what happened with this song u was recordin

...... ya she was pregnet 4 12 months and yo dont be low like that and start sayin im lyin about my daughter k im bein honest to you. and that recordin clearly aint happin i have more important things to do and i went to the army so that got in the way too
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Postby Trigger » Apr 17th, '06, 23:36

g_killa wrote:but the guy himself sed u lied and there u are clearly lyin again
i have no idea wat ur talkin about ne more and yo just pm me and be mature about this cause if ur still talkin about that song ill let u know wat happened to it
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Postby Trigger » Apr 17th, '06, 23:37

g_killa wrote:nah i exposed you as still bein a fake bitch its cool i dont need to pm u

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Postby AspirinE » Apr 18th, '06, 00:25

Angie wrote::unsure: though u was like 16 thats wut u told me


for fucks sake keep it in ur pants guys!!! :laughing:


u can go to the army at 16?
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Apr 18th, '06, 00:35

it was pretty good.

your girl couldn't be pregnant for 12 months. humans are pregnant for 9 months
so that makes your baby 7 months old...not 4


but the rap was pretty good. keep it up...
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I still rap better than you.

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Postby Vettori » Apr 18th, '06, 00:45

LMAO, this kids only 16, and you was still a virgin when i chilled wit ya last, which was maybe 4-5 months ago, how u pull out sayin yu had sex 16 months ago, U got some fucked up shit goin on in ya head, LMFAO, just had to state that, its sad....lmfao WELCOME TO TR
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Postby Vettori » Apr 18th, '06, 00:50

naw i came back b4 him, It's wierd you always got some negative thinkin eh there Gkilla, try keepin shit real, Thanx

Once again (any one, that means anyone) has a problem with me, Pm me
you dun gotta get anyone else involved,
thats a hint gkilla, settle are differances in pm
I come back, Not seekin beef, You see my name, you wanna jump right on that

PM ME
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Postby Vettori » Apr 18th, '06, 00:54

Sarah wrote:Oh man, complete ownage :laughing:



About the army and pregnant thing :confusion: that isn't possible. No one can be pregnant for 12 months :confusion: . And don't you have to be 18 to join the army?


Exactly he's pure bullshit, and im one of the only people here who can clarify that exactly....State ur proof, id like a Photo, with yu ur mom ur sister ur dad, ur bro, and ur new "BABY GIRL" in ur army uniform
all standin in one pic

You cant afford a mic, does that mean u cant afford a camera ?
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Postby Vettori » Apr 18th, '06, 00:57

kk gkilla, my bad for taking shit the wrong way, i just dunno how to take anything at the moment lmao, Too much hatin goin on in the world right now, Ummm, but yea, for trigga "exposed"

PS: i guess that wierd coincedence, But i aint talk to this goof in A long time lmao, thas how its gonna remain
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Re: It Was All A Dream

Postby SCAR-FACE » Apr 19th, '06, 23:26

g_killa wrote:
Trigger wrote: shes 4 months Jasmene.


16 months ago


now im no smart guy but im sure 16 - 4 = 12 and how the hell is she pregnant for 12 months......you gotta come back with better crap nxt time dude...oh btw what happened with this song u was recordin


this dude is crazy asying he had sex tigger ur momma dont count and neither does ms Palmer
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Postby Vettori » Apr 20th, '06, 19:01

faith i thought u and trigger go 2 the same skool


Well we do, But after our lil problem on TR, shits changed, we dun talk, and i prefer it that way, and yea the kids only 16, Has no gf, stil la virgin, and LMFAO How u have a kid...if yu still a virgin ?
How u at the army, if u always at school?
How u making big money, and still dont have a Mic and cam for ur comp,
How u making big money, still livin at home gettin it off ya mom?
u aint, But yu were right about one thing, "That shit will always be just a dream"
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