Spaz Out (Best of Cosh/Retirement)

[WakeUpShow]

Thanks to everyone who gave me any kind of feedback over the time I've been here. I've grown so much as a writer since I've started. I know I'm prone to filler, so I thought I would put my best lines together. I may be back in the future, but I will be giving more feedback nowadays. Thanks y'all and Enjoy!

INSTRUMENTAL: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F5s4oNm7Vxo

My music's always followed by a "Turn the sound up!"
I treat ganja like construction, getting higher from the ground-up
Cosh in his prime....you could never defeat 'em
Are you legs best friends....cause no one ever gets between em
Your brain'll percolate those, in a moment you'll be feeling grand
I love to circulate flows, and that's why I'm always ceiling fans
I'm married to logic and I'm fondlin' reason
If you say that you're crackin', it's cause you're gobblin' seamen
Grasp the pen, and I'll surely send the led flyin'
Try to battle me and taste defeat like Rex Ryan
Fail to judge me...you know it's Trial and Error
I hope you caught the stench of death in my smile of terror
Have you hyperventilating, taking breath lessons
I'll predicate your fate and subject you to a death sentence
The detective told me to clean up my act
So I brought bleach to my next murder scene in a bag!

[Atone]

The beginning, idk, maybe it's cuz i read that line before, but it bored me, i liked it the first time

That goblin seamin line made me bust out laughing

idk who rex ryan is so i don't get that line

the rest is dope, love the last 2 lines, perfect way to end it, swear i'v read that one before to tho, but still great

hope you do come back with more in the future man, your one of my favorites in the CW section

[WakeUpShow]

thanks atone, yeah they have all been used before.

[WakeUpShow]

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[Xray]

That was fire. You've definitely progressed as a writer so just keep your consistency. Def your best piece. I thought the ganja line was impressive, but this is my fav part:

The detective told me to clean up my act
So I brought bleach to my next murder scene in a bag!

[WakeUpShow]

That was fire. You've definitely progressed as a writer so just keep your consistency. Def your best piece. I thought the ganja line was impressive, but this is my fav part:

The detective told me to clean up my act
So I brought bleach to my next murder scene in a bag!

thanks alot man! means alot coming from a great writer like yourself

Geno, & C.R.E.A.M- Thanks guys, I'll feed your pieces when I get the chance.

[WakeUpShow]

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