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Black Out (Responce To Venom)

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Black Out (Responce To Venom)

Postby Atone » Jun 12th, '11, 01:30

I'm only fuckin around in this, i got no real beef with Venom, just playfully throwin some shots here in response to this viewtopic.php?f=24&t=116271&p=1662563#p1662563

(Verse)
You ring bell's but when this over i'll be gettin the crown
sittin you down- let me teach you how to flip it around
when an emcee spits- and i come trickin em out
i'll take the devil by the horns and snap em
half of what you say has me laughin- where's your passion
why the fuck are you rappin- what happened
wasn't you tryin to join the cast of- some gay porn classic
with several swords- juggalin human balls in hords
you gainin rewards but still can barly afford-
house and home- so you wear a blouse and roam
corners to market while you joust for foam
to make enough cash but still- you a wack rapper
who's act lacks the facts that back up
any story you ever told- anything you ever said
And you claim that as a baby you was stuck behind bars
fuckiin lair- in reality you got fucked from behind in cars
thats why they call you Venom Black Viper
namin you after your favorite spot to fuck- you the type to-
suck venom out the sack and this is where i blast out
this outcast is about to just fuckin black out

I aslo gave feed to this
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Re: Black Out (Responce To Venom)

Postby VenomBlackViper » Jun 12th, '11, 02:12

Possibly the worst piece i've ever read in in this section
Weak multies & wack jabs at my name ain't a diss, more like disscretion
Bitch you better ask for forgiveness & Atone
Before I break every body in your gay bone
Trailer trash, whistling at a sailors ass
Making threads in backstage, crying about getting abused, raped & smashed
Only praise for rap you ever got was jokes & sarcasm
Having suicidal thoughts walking on eggshells, well I hope you start cracking
This faggot raps about scat porn & rapin' mules
Every underdog has his day, yours is April Fools
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Re: Black Out (Responce To Venom)

Postby Atone » Jun 12th, '11, 02:21

VenomBlackViper wrote:Possibly the worst piece i've ever read in in this section
Weak multies & wack jabs at my name ain't a diss, more like disscretion
Bitch you better ask for forgiveness & Atone
Before I break every body in your gay bone
Trailer trash, whistling at a sailors ass
Making threads in backstage, crying about getting abused, raped & smashed
Only praise for rap you ever got was jokes & sarcasm
Having suicidal thoughts walking on eggshells, well I hope you start cracking
This faggot raps about scat porn & rapin' mules
Every underdog has his day, yours is April Fools


:worship: :worship: :worship:

i laughed at all this man, i love it :b: :b: :b:
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Re: Black Out (Responce To Venom)

Postby VenomBlackViper » Jun 12th, '11, 02:23

That was fun, now time to get back to writing my sox verse for the tourney.
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