My Perceptions ft. Fa-Q

[Spyder]

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Spyder
Some work themselves to death to be overshadowed with loved ones
I say that this worlds just a shadow, of what it was once.
Can someone explain the change? Things strange day to day
They saying maybe youll get the picture if you change the frame.
I say its about resolution, im not talkin about war and poverty
Or the war with sodomy that shit bores me honestly,
Its more commonly known as reality, but we been tricked and it aint
You see mansion and car, no longer causalities that’s the picture we paint.
Im a visionary, listen to me, im trying to start the next movement
And change the world with words like Malcolm X was doin,
Walk with me, what you says nothin? You go with the shit?
If talk is cheap? Tell me then why is Oprah so rich?
Kids snicker behind me, do their little gimmicks to try me
And say im foolish to do this cause my skin tinted ivory,
Well you can attempt to stop me, leave me with stitches but smiling
But as for me giving up changin this place? Submissions unlikely.

(hook x2)
I continue my perceptions as one stressed cynic
why I am never happy with what I’ve been given
I know no matter how great it can all end in a minute
they say the worlds smaller I say theres less in it.

Fa-Q
Sit back and watch the world spin on its axis,
Its allies, tell Kamikazes stop as each relaxes,
As the Illuminati slowly controls and piles bones,
Leaving finger traces on dollars with mile stones,
Now my fake smile groans, youth oozing uzis,
I'm losing to these, cult leaders with twin sisters,
Little Marry engaged ten ways to ten misters,
Polygamy rings, seeing this, the pig in me screams,
Hating it, suddenly but slowly the bigotry sings,
Disney sees young girls, so they crossed their tease,
The red dots on four heads, no need to capitalize,
With eyes on the money, their capital eyes,
In our nation's capitol's skies, lies world hatred,
Wrapped in whole lies, and the Elite knows,
As the beat grows, and you eat those, so riot so the,
Elite doesnt rot your mind slowly, with Diet Cola,


(hook x2)
I continue my perceptions as one stressed cynic
why I am never happy with what I’ve been given
I know no matter how great it can all end in a minute
they say the worlds smaller I say theres less in it.

[Fa-Q]

Loved doing this, Spy

[Spyder]

ima feed this since everyone else is sleeping beauty


@Fa-Q, i picked you for this track cause i knew you would fit it and i was right. i love the emotion/story telling vibe you give. always got some quotables in there, this wasnt your best piece but obviously only one can hold that title so most pieces wont be your best

Disney sees young girls, so they crossed their tease,
The red dots on four heads, no need to capitalize,
With eyes on the money, their capital eyes,
In our nation's capitol's skies, lies world hatred,
Wrapped in whole lies, and the Elite knows,

these didnt fit the couplet rhyme scheme and threw the flow off for me. but other than that good


@Spyder, love what you did here. felt the real emotion and it came threw with meaning in simplicity.
first line was dank quote and got me interested in reading the drop, smooth flow as always.

love when you two collab, should happen more often. nice hook as well
whole track 8.5/10

[Fa-Q]

ima feed this since everyone else is sleeping beauty


@Fa-Q, i picked you for this track cause i knew you would fit it and i was right. i love the emotion/story telling vibe you give. always got some quotables in there, this wasnt your best piece but obviously only one can hold that title so most pieces wont be your best

Disney sees young girls, so they crossed their tease,
The red dots on four heads, no need to capitalize,
With eyes on the money, their capital eyes,
In our nation's capitol's skies, lies world hatred,
Wrapped in whole lies, and the Elite knows,

these didnt fit the couplet rhyme scheme and threw the flow off for me. but other than that good


@Spyder, love what you did here. felt the real emotion and it came threw with meaning in simplicity.
first line was dank quote and got me interested in reading the drop, smooth flow as always.

love when you two collab, should happen more often. nice hook as well
whole track 8.5/10

haha damn, I really didnt see that crossed their tease doesnt fit in....I was worried about the play on of "crossed your T's and dot your I's" line....and World Hated was filler to get to Whole Lies which does rhyme with capitol skies, then Elite Knows rhymes with the next line....I just try to not get too boxed in with doing A/A B/B style rhyming

[Ka0t1c]

I think "once was" would sound much better

[Fa-Q]

I think "once was" would sound much better

What? Once Was where?

[Ka0t1c]

1st verse before someone explain my pain... don't
u think so?

[Devil'sAdvocate]

Fa-Q's verse was crazy son!

[Fa-Q]

Fa-Q's verse was crazy son!

Thanks DA

[Enimee]

im definitly feelin this piece yall came at some well discussed topics and approached them very skillfully, i like the multis and all the vocab fa-q used, while spyders verse flowed and attacked a few more political issues and made very strong opinionated points...as i said, well done

[Fa-Q]

thank you, enimee