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CHALLENGE 4 ALL

Postby Darjan333 » Jul 14th, '05, 11:08

I challenge anyone who wants to battle with me!
Wanna hear rhymes!!!
Rules-No more of ten lines!

Show me what you got!
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Postby Rapsoldier101 » Jul 14th, '05, 11:39

you want to battle me? this faggot must be jokin,
this man is like tobacco rolled up cause im bout to smoke him,
fuck rappin i have the gun loaded and cocked,
with amunition strapped to me commin towards your block,
pickin up the mic to me? ur ass better stop,
or do like snoop dogg and drop it like its hot,
im a bust you if i catch you like im a fuckin cop,
in reality and lyriclly bitch, i shit you not,
when you read this you'll prolly die of astonishment,
you wanted to battle and you just paid the consequence,

i could have kept goin but ...u kno...the ten line thing anyways you go

~1~
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Postby Darjan333 » Jul 14th, '05, 14:37

you are first who replied to...so I will go easy on you :twisted:
I will put you on grill with a nice ketchup fill
But until I will have a chance to kill,i will have a lot of skill
so let
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Postby Rapsoldier101 » Jul 15th, '05, 01:08

fuck rushin roulette i'll peel a cap in your head,
or instead i'll take my knife and slit up your neck,
im writtin crap? your rymes are on the bottom of my toilet,
if your future is rap,and thats your plan,ima foil it,
your wannabe career is already down hill,
after i beat you in this battle i'll be crowned ill,
no matter what you think you still aint found skill,
come to chicago poppin that shit and bet you get killed,
in that pic you lucky that ur hat titlted to the left,
but still the black stones might come get ya for that,


(to let you kno i aint a black stone but his hat is tilted to the left which is black stones plus he's wearin black)
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Postby Darjan333 » Jul 15th, '05, 10:40

Ok,i thought I can handle this,
But I dont know english, and I cant make good diss...
I wont say bad things for u,I am dick
Even-i will not try to shot you with brick
The end-this is end for me
Rhymes are not my territory
I have no skills-i agree
City and music-its my life
Everybody have a knife...



I really quit man!
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Postby 4D » Jul 16th, '05, 11:09

You should, you`re crap!!
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Postby Darjan333 » Jul 16th, '05, 11:13

fuck you!I am just trying to end it on easy way...
Suck my dick Fordie :x
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Postby The Rock » Jul 16th, '05, 11:57

FORDIE wrote:You should, you`re crap!!



gahgahghaghaghaghaghagha


that shit was hilarious :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:


but hey it's true... i agree wit' him...

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not nice

Postby shadyslady121 » Jul 20th, '05, 05:27

That's nice..keep trying you will do good.

Here's a rap

you all are saying eachothers raps are wack
did you look at yours face front not back
thinking you are gangster and talking your shit
keep rapping online that will get you fame I am sure Dr dre will feel the same
People trying to call out my name
Acting like they gangster when most of them never even stepped foot in the hood
so keep thinking you ripping the charts
Sorry little boy but the only thing you ripping is your farts

I do much better but what ever lol..anyways he doesn't suck and don't give up..ok
your cute 2 lol
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Postby DragonzEdge » Jul 20th, '05, 14:04

you suck too
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Postby Guest » Jul 20th, '05, 16:53

um hunny I can't suck I am being produced lol I am a pro you just rap online..and don't be talking shit to me..
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Re: not nice

Postby 4D » Jul 20th, '05, 23:22

shadyslady121 wrote:That's nice..keep trying you will do good.

Here's a rap

you all are saying eachothers raps are wack
did you look at yours face front not back
thinking you are gangster and talking your shit
keep rapping online that will get you fame I am sure Dr dre will feel the same
People trying to call out my name
Acting like they gangster when most of them never even stepped foot in the hood
so keep thinking you ripping the charts
Sorry little boy but the only thing you ripping is your farts

I do much better but what ever lol..anyways he doesn't suck and don't give up..ok
your cute 2 lol


Hey you wanna hit on him maybe you should pm him, both of you raps suck ass!! you`d make a nice couple,lol.
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Postby DragonzEdge » Jul 21st, '05, 08:04

just cuz you are bein produce dont mean you can't suck. take a look at Jkwon :roll:
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